List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and ensure clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and keeps me within my budget. This way, I avoid forgetting items and overspending.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but includes some hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

예시: Definitely, I often make lists for my work tasks because they help me stay organized and manage my time effectively, preventing me from wasting time on unproductive activities.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid redundancy.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they are confident in their memory and prefer to dive straight into their work without spending time on planning.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clarify your ideas and use correct tenses. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: It depends on how much time I have. If I have plenty of time, I prefer making a list on paper. However, if I'm in a hurry, I use a digital app like Notes because it helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I I would love to make a list when I shop because it helps me to remind, because it helps me to remind remember all the things which I need to buy and it helps me to stay in my budgets and it helps me to stay alert like whether I'm forgot something or.

✓ Yes, I would love to make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember all the things which I need to buy and it helps me to stay within my budget and it helps me to stay alert in case I forget something.

The phrase 'helps me to remind remember' is incorrect; 'remind' should be replaced with 'remember' as the correct verb here. Also, 'stay in my budgets' should be 'stay within my budget' to use the correct preposition and singular form. 'Whether I'm forgot something' is incorrect; it should be 'in case I forget something' to express possibility correctly.

× ...and it helps me to stay in my budgets...

✓ ...and it helps me to stay within my budget...

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'within' when referring to staying inside limits such as a budget. Also, 'budgets' should be singular 'budget' to match the context.

× ...like whether I'm forgot something or.

✓ ...in case I forget something.

The phrase 'I'm forgot' is incorrect because 'forgot' is the past tense and cannot be used with 'am'. The correct form is 'I forget' in the present tense to express a possible future event.

× Most of the time I make a list for my work taskers because it helps me to stay organized and stay within my, you know. Within my time zone so that I so that I can't waste time on unproductive task is that's why I make the list always.

✓ Most of the time I make a list for my work tasks because it helps me to stay organized and stay within my time zone so that I don't waste time on unproductive tasks. That's why I always make the list.

The word 'taskers' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'tasks'. Also, 'task is' should be 'tasks'. The phrase 'I can't waste time' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I don't waste time' to express intention. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× According to my opinion, I think some individual they just more confident about their abilities and they don't want to waste time on making lists and they have they have they have the confidence on their self like we can't forget anything and they just use that time to straighten dive into their works.

✓ In my opinion, I think some individuals are just more confident about their abilities and they don't want to waste time making lists. They have confidence in themselves, believing they can't forget anything, and they just use that time to dive straight into their work.

The phrase 'some individual they' is incorrect; it should be 'some individuals are'. 'Confidence on their self' should be 'confidence in themselves'. 'Straighten dive' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'dive straight'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or job in general.

× ...and they have they have they have the confidence on their self...

✓ ...and they have confidence in themselves...

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to confidence. Also, 'their self' should be 'themselves' as the correct reflexive pronoun.

× ...and they just use that time to straighten dive into their works.

✓ ...and they just use that time to dive straight into their work.

The phrase 'straighten dive' is incorrect; the correct order is 'dive straight'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' when referring to tasks collectively.

× Well, it totally depends on time. If if I had a lot of time, then I'll make a list on paper. And if I last time, then I'll just use the digital app to make a list such as nodes.

✓ Well, it totally depends on the time. If I have a lot of time, then I'll make a list on paper. And if I have less time, then I'll just use a digital app to make a list such as Notes.

'If I had a lot of time' is past tense and inconsistent with 'I'll make'; it should be 'If I have a lot of time' for present/future conditional. 'If I last time' is incorrect; it should be 'If I have less time'. 'Nodes' is likely a typo for 'Notes'. Also, 'depends on time' should be 'depends on the time' for specificity.

× ...then I'll just use the digital app to make a list such as nodes.

✓ ...then I'll just use a digital app to make a list such as Notes.

The article 'the' is incorrect here because the app is not specified; 'a' is appropriate. Also, 'nodes' is a typo and should be 'Notes'.