List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things.'

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things if I don't write them down.

제안: Clarify your answer and use correct vocabulary. Also, connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list for my work, but sometimes it doesn't help because unexpected tasks come up.'

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, but sometimes it doesn't help because unexpected tasks come up and interrupt my plans.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary or prefer to remember things themselves.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary or prefer to remember things themselves.

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Explain your preference clearly. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves time and I can access it anywhere.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves time and I can access it anywhere.

× Yes, I usually make all make a list when I go to the shopping because of I'm easily forget or forget things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things.

The phrase 'all make a list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is singular and sufficient. 'The shopping' should be 'shopping' without 'the' as it is an uncountable noun here. 'I'm easily forget or forget things' is incorrect; it should be 'I easily forget things' because 'forget' is a verb and does not follow 'I'm' in this context.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I walk but it doesn't work because of summer so important things are are always come between my work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I work but it doesn't work because in summer important things always come up during my work.

The phrase 'when I walk' should be 'when I work' as 'walk' is incorrect in this context. 'Because of summer' should be 'because in summer' to indicate time. 'Are are always come' is incorrect; it should be 'always come up'. 'Between my work' should be 'during my work' to indicate time period.

× Some people like a Mickey list because of they forget or things where what they what they should and they make a list for for their own opinion.

✓ Some people like a quick list because they forget things or what they should do, and they make a list according to their own opinion.

'A Mickey list' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'a quick list' fits better. 'Because of they forget or things where what they what they should' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'because they forget things or what they should do'. 'For for their own opinion' should be 'according to their own opinion'.

× I usually prefer only make a list on a phone because of it are consumed my time and when I make a list on a phone I can easily move anywhere.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list only on my phone because it saves my time, and when I make a list on my phone I can easily access it anywhere.

'Prefer only make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'On a phone' should be 'on my phone' to indicate possession. 'Because of it are consumed my time' is incorrect; it should be 'because it saves my time'. 'I can easily move anywhere' is unclear; 'I can easily access it anywhere' is appropriate.