List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ звучит естественно, но можно улучшить структуру предложения и добавить немного деталей для полноты. Например, использовать правильные предлоги и более точные выражения.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need.

제안: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно улучшить структуру предложения, сделать его более понятным и логичным, а также добавить объяснение эффективности списка.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and complete them efficiently.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности. Следует использовать правильную грамматику и более чётко выразить мысль, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or they prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Нужно улучшить связность и грамматику, а также сделать ответ более плавным и естественным.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient, but if my phone's battery is low, I write the list on paper instead.

× Yes, I always make a list when I'm going to shop.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I'm going shopping.

The verb 'go' is commonly followed by the '-ing' form when indicating an activity, so 'going shopping' is correct instead of 'going to shop'. This is a common English expression for indicating the activity of shopping.

× Yes, I always make a list for my job is the. This work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my job. It works.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be split into two clear sentences: one stating the action and the other confirming its effectiveness. 'It works' is the correct phrase to indicate that making a list is effective.

× Some people like making list be 'cause they can for get any things that he or they have to do it.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they can forget things that they have to do.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'some people'. 'Be 'cause' is informal and incorrect; use 'because'. 'For get' should be 'forget'. 'Any things' should be 'things'. The pronouns should be consistent and plural 'they'. The phrase 'have to do it' is redundant; 'have to do' suffices.

× I prefer make a list on my phone, but when I'm when my phone has low battery, I. Prepare list on the paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone, but when my phone has low battery, I prepare a list on paper.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'making' is required. The phrase 'when I'm when my phone' is redundant; only 'when my phone' is needed. 'Prepare list' needs an article: 'prepare a list'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general expression.