List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些重复，且有语法错误（如“anytime”应为“any time”）。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并注意语法细节。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me plan ahead and saves time when I am at the store.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如“list on to do so”不明确），句子不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，合理使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Sometimes I make a to-do list for my work, including important tasks and helpful tips. This usually works well because it reminds me of what I need to do next.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有些句子断裂且口语化词汇较多（如“you know”），建议使用更正式和连贯的表达，避免句子中断。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to decide what to do spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

제안: 回答较自然且内容具体，但口语化表达较多（如“'cause”，“Well, but comparatively”），建议使用更正式的连接词和表达，使语言更流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. If I forget what to do, I can easily check my notes. On the other hand, paper lists can be lost easily.

× I think this would help me prepare in advance what I will buy so that I will not waste anytime on deciding what to buy when I step into the shopping store.

✓ I think this would help me prepare in advance what I will buy so that I will not waste any time deciding what to buy when I step into the shopping store.

The phrase 'waste anytime on deciding' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'waste any time deciding' without the preposition 'on'. 'Anytime' as one word is an adverb meaning 'at any time', but here 'any time' as two words is needed as a noun phrase. Also, 'waste any time deciding' is the correct collocation.

× I would list on to do so and some tips.

✓ I would list things to do and some tips.

The phrase 'list on to do so' is incorrect. The verb 'list' should be followed directly by the items being listed without the preposition 'on'. Also, 'to do so' is awkward here; it should be 'things to do' to clearly express the meaning.

× I think oftentimes it works because. The tips are very useful and help remind me what to do next.

✓ I think oftentimes it works because the tips are very useful and help remind me what to do next.

The original sentence is split incorrectly with a period after 'because', which breaks the sentence structure. 'Because' should be followed by the reason in the same sentence, so the two parts should be combined into one sentence.

× And they would rather. Decide what to do when the moment comes.

✓ And they would rather decide what to do when the moment comes.

The sentence is incorrectly split with a period after 'rather'. 'Would rather' is a modal verb phrase that should be followed directly by the base verb without a period interrupting the phrase.