List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了你喜欢购物时列清单的观点，但语言不够流畅，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议你练习使用简单清晰的句子，避免重复，并且注意语法的正确性。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. Without a list, I often forget important items.

제안: 你的回答表达了对工作列清单的看法，但句子不完整且逻辑不清晰。建议你用完整的句子表达观点，并且说明原因，使回答更连贯。

예시: I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I prefer to focus directly on my tasks to save time.

제안: 你的回答中有很多语法和表达错误，导致意思不清楚。建议你练习用简单句表达原因，并且避免使用错误的词汇。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and is not helpful for them.

제안: 你的回答表达了你喜欢用手机列清单的观点，但句子不连贯且有语法错误。建议你练习用完整句子表达观点，并且说明原因，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can set reminders, which help me remember what to do and when to do it.

× It's very important for me That makes that.

✓ It's very important for me. That helps me.

原句中句子结构混乱，'That makes that'没有明确含义，应该拆分为两个句子并使用合适的动词表达意思。建议将其改为'That helps me'，使句子通顺。

× Makes me don't forget to buy some.

✓ It helps me not to forget to buy some.

原句缺少主语，且'Makes me don't forget'结构不正确。应加上主语'It'，并使用正确的否定形式'not to forget'。

× I have to buy it.

✓ I have to buy it.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× When I, when I, when I'm shopping, I always forget to buy it something I need that I don't make.

✓ When I'm shopping, I always forget to buy something I need if I don't make a list.

原句结构混乱，重复且语序错误。应简化并调整语序，使句意清晰。

× It is nothing useful for me to make a list.

✓ Making a list is not useful for me.

原句表达不自然，'It is nothing useful'用法错误，改为'Making a list is not useful'更符合英语表达习惯。

× For my work.

✓ For my work.

该句为片段句，缺乏谓语，建议与前句合并或补充谓语。

× So it is wasting my time because when I'm making a list, I have to spend a lot of time on it, expand.

✓ So it wastes my time because when I'm making a list, I have to spend a lot of time on it.

'it is wasting'应改为一般现在时'wastes'，'expand'无意义，应删除。

× That makes me.

✓ That causes me to have less time.

原句不完整，缺乏谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Not enough time to.

✓ I don't have enough time.

原句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× And to make my work being.

✓ And to finish my work.

原句语法错误，'make my work being'不正确，应改为'finish my work'。

× Because this.

✓ Because this is not suitable for everyone.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整。

× Lace is not a suitable for anyone.

✓ Making lists is not suitable for everyone.

'Lace'应为'Making lists'，且'a suitable'用法错误，应去掉冠词。

× Some people, they make a list, they will.

✓ Some people make a list, and they will.

句子断裂，缺少连接词，需补充连词使句子完整。

× They would like to spend a lot of time on it.

✓ They like to spend a lot of time on it.

'Would like to'表示愿望，语境中应使用一般现在时表达习惯行为。

× It is wasting time for people to make a list.

✓ Making a list wastes people's time.

原句结构不自然，改为主动语态更通顺。

× If it doesn't use food for any funny, so.

✓ If it is not useful for anything, then.

原句词汇错误且语序混乱，'use food for any funny'无意义，应改为'not useful for anything'。

× I don't think people like it.

✓ I don't think people like it.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I make a list on my phones.

✓ I make a list on my phone.

'phones'应为单数'phone'，因为通常指一个设备。

× I can set the time to notice me.

✓ I can set a time to remind me.

'notice me'用法错误，应使用'remind me'表示提醒。

× Thats telling me what I'm going to do.

✓ That tells me what I'm going to do.

'Thats'应为'That's'，且时态应为一般现在时。

× In, when, in, how to do it so.

✓ When and how to do it.

原句杂乱无章，应简化为'When and how to do it'。

× It is a. Good, you. It is a good function.

✓ It is a good feature.

原句断裂且用词不当，'good function'改为'good feature'更自然。