List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且句子结构有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免语法错误。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. Instead, I tend to buy daily items online as soon as I realize they are running out.

제안: 回答中断且表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并且更自然地连接句子。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they usually help me stay organized because I like to prepare things in advance.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，建议简化句子并使用正确的语法和词汇。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to keep track of them, and sometimes they feel it's a waste of time.

제안: 回答中断且有语法错误，建议使用完整句子并更流畅地表达观点。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me set reminders and manage my calendar efficiently.

× I usually shop online immediately when some daily items are absent.

✓ I usually shop online immediately when some daily items are absent.

该句中没有明显的单复数错误，'items'为复数形式，符合语境。

× Yes, I often make lists for my work and it works usually because I like to prepare for. Things in advance.

✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work and it usually works because I like to prepare things in advance.

原句中断句错误，'prepare for.'后面不应有句号，且'Things'不应大写。应将句子连贯起来，调整词序使表达更自然。

× I think people who don't like making lists. Is because they said ghost that hard to retrieve and sometimes it's just likes a waste of time?

✓ I think people who don't like making lists say that it's hard to retrieve and sometimes it's just like a waste of time.

原句中断句错误，'lists.'后不应有句号，且'said ghost'应为'say that it's'，'likes'应为'like'，句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps to set reminders and. Change calendars to help. Manage my time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps to set reminders and change calendars to help manage my time.

'prefer'后应接不定式'to make'，且句中多处断句错误，句子应连贯，去除多余句号。