List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and avoid redundancy. Also, complete your thoughts fully within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from spending too much money on unnecessary items. This way, I can shop efficiently and save both time and money.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

예시: I don't always make a list for my work, but sometimes I do because I tend to forget tasks. When I make a list, it helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. Also, many people use their mobile phones to note down important tasks instead of making traditional lists.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, explain your preference with reasons and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it has a notes application. This makes it easy for me to write down and check my lists anytime. Therefore, I rarely use paper for making lists.

× I make a list when I go for the shopping because it helps me to remember the things that what need to purchase and whatnot so that I could not expand a spend a lot of money on the purchases.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to remember the things that I need to purchase and whatnot so that I do not spend a lot of money on the purchases.

The phrase 'go for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form correctly. Also, 'what need to purchase' lacks a subject and should be 'that I need to purchase'. 'Could not expand a spend' is incorrect; it should be 'do not spend' to express present habitual action.

× Apart from this, it could help me to.

✓ Apart from this, it could help me too.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper ending. 'Help me to' requires an action verb after 'to'. The intended meaning is likely 'help me too', meaning 'also help me'.

× Not all the time, but sometimes I make a list for my work because it sometimes I go I forgot that my work and in that case I I make a list for my work and it really works for me.

✓ Not all the time, but sometimes I make a list for my work because sometimes I forget my work, and in that case, I make a list for my work and it really works for me.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb forms. 'I go I forgot that my work' is incorrect; it should be 'I forget my work'. Also, repeated 'I' is a mistake. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper tense usage.

× I can't explain it properly because everybody is having the different kind of memory XI.

✓ I can't explain it properly because everybody has a different kind of memory.

'Everybody is having' is incorrect; 'everybody has' is the correct present simple form. 'The different kind of memory XI' is unclear and likely a transcription error; corrected to 'a different kind of memory'.

× According to my perspective, those people do not prepare the list who are having the good memory and they can remember eyes the things very easily.

✓ According to my perspective, those people who have good memory do not prepare a list because they can remember things very easily.

'Who are having the good memory' is incorrect; 'who have good memory' is correct. 'Remember eyes the things' is incorrect and corrected to 'remember things'. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not specific.

× Apart from this the they can have the phones that everybody know used to write in the notes of the mobile.

✓ Apart from this, they can use their phones as everybody knows to write notes on the mobile.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and word order. 'The they' is incorrect; should be 'they'. 'Can have the phones' is incorrect; 'can use their phones' is correct. 'Everybody know used to write in the notes of the mobile' is incorrect; corrected to 'everybody knows to write notes on the mobile'.

× If I talk about myself, I always prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is having an application which is known as notes.

✓ If I talk about myself, I always prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it has an application known as Notes.

'It is having' is incorrect; 'it has' is correct. 'Known as notes' should be 'known as Notes' with capitalization as it is an app name.

× So I can easily write down the required things on that and I can have a look from thou notes.

✓ So I can easily write down the required things on it and I can have a look at those notes.

'On that' should be 'on it' referring to the phone. 'Have a look from thou notes' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'have a look at those notes'.

× What is reason I can say that I used? I don't use of traditional methods of list making on the paper.

✓ The reason I can say is that I don't use traditional methods of list making on paper.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What is reason I can say that I used?' is incorrect. Corrected to a clear sentence expressing the reason. 'I don't use of traditional methods' is incorrect; 'I don't use traditional methods' is correct. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'.