List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'Tennessee' (có thể bạn muốn nói 'tendency') và cấu trúc câu không đúng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes this makes it hard to manage my time effectively while shopping.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'who are have' và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách công việc.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. This way, I can manage my time better and ensure I complete everything on schedule.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'felt lazy' (nên là 'feel lazy') và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. They might also find it boring or unnecessary for their daily routine.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'ride by Mahan Ann'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier and faster for me. I'm not very good at typing on a computer, so writing by hand suits me better.

× I don't have any Tennessee to make A to do list when I'm go shopping because I'm fine with like inconvenient and sometimes I would like it really easy for me to be like hard to control the time I have to spend.

✓ I don't have any tendency to make a to-do list when I go shopping because I'm fine with being a bit inconvenient and sometimes I find it really hard to control the time I have to spend.

The pronoun 'Tennessee' is incorrect; it should be 'tendency'. Also, 'I'm go shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'I go shopping'. The sentence also has awkward phrasing that was corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't have any Tennessee to make A to do list when I'm go shopping because I'm fine with like inconvenient and sometimes I would like it really easy for me to be like hard to control the time I have to spend.

✓ I don't have any tendency to make a to-do list when I go shopping because I'm fine with being a bit inconvenient and sometimes I find it really hard to control the time I have to spend.

The phrase 'I'm go shopping' is incorrect; the verb should be in the present participle form 'going' if used with 'I'm', or simply 'I go shopping'. Here, 'I go shopping' fits better.

× Actually, no, I don't. I don't have any Tennessee to make A to do list when I'm go shopping because I'm fine with like inconvenient and sometimes I would like it really easy for me to be like hard to control the time I have to spend.

✓ Actually, no, I don't. I don't have any tendency to make a to-do list when I go shopping because I'm fine with some inconvenience and sometimes I find it really hard to control the time I have to spend.

The phrase 'like inconvenient' is incorrect; 'inconvenient' is an adjective and should be used with a noun or changed to a noun form like 'inconvenience'. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'.

× I'm the kind of person who are have a little bit remaining an analyzing so that I have a tendency to make A to do list when I do anything specially for the work because I find it easy to me to control the time and know the things that I have to do at the day.

✓ I'm the kind of person who has a little bit of remaining analyzing, so I have a tendency to make a to-do list when I do anything, especially for work, because I find it easy to control the time and know the things that I have to do during the day.

The phrase 'who are have' is incorrect; it should be 'who has' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially', and 'at the day' should be 'during the day'.

× I'm the kind of person who are have a little bit remaining an analyzing so that I have a tendency to make A to do list when I do anything specially for the work because I find it easy to me to control the time and know the things that I have to do at the day.

✓ I'm the kind of person who has a little bit of remaining analyzing, so I have a tendency to make a to-do list when I do anything, especially for work, because I find it easy to control the time and know the things that I have to do during the day.

The word 'specially' is an adverb meaning 'in a special manner', but the correct word here is 'especially', meaning 'particularly'.

× I think that they don't want to make a list because they felt lazy or maybe they feel is wasted time because to plan or ideas is weighs about 50 to 30 minutes per day.

✓ I think that they don't want to make a list because they feel lazy or maybe they feel it is a waste of time because planning or thinking of ideas weighs about 30 to 50 minutes per day.

The verb 'felt' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'feel'. Also, 'feel is wasted time' is incorrect; it should be 'feel it is a waste of time'. The phrase 'to plan or ideas is weighs' is incorrect; it should be 'planning or thinking of ideas weighs'.

× I think that they don't want to make a list because they felt lazy or maybe they feel is wasted time because to plan or ideas is weighs about 50 to 30 minutes per day.

✓ I think that they don't want to make a list because they feel lazy or maybe they feel it is a waste of time because planning or thinking of ideas weighs about 30 to 50 minutes per day.

The time range '50 to 30 minutes' is reversed; it should be '30 to 50 minutes' to indicate a range from smaller to larger.

× I think that they don't want to make a list because they felt lazy or maybe they feel is wasted time because to plan or ideas is weighs about 50 to 30 minutes per day.

✓ I think that they don't want to make a list because they feel lazy or maybe they feel it is a waste of time because planning or thinking of ideas weighs about 30 to 50 minutes per day.

The phrase 'they feel is wasted time' is missing the pronoun 'it' to refer to the subject; it should be 'they feel it is a waste of time'.

× I love to like plan a list on the paper because as help me easier to ride by Mahan Ann is more like faster because I'm not the kind of person who are who are good like typing on the computer.

✓ I love to plan a list on paper because it helps me write faster, as I'm not the kind of person who is good at typing on the computer.

The phrase 'plan a list on the paper' should be 'plan a list on paper' (no article). 'As help me easier to ride by Mahan Ann is more like faster' is unclear and corrected to 'it helps me write faster'. 'Good like typing' should be 'good at typing'.

× I'm not the kind of person who are who are good like typing on the computer.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who is good at typing on the computer.

The phrase 'who are who are' is incorrect; it should be 'who is' to agree with the singular subject 'person'.