List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. For instance, last week my mother asked me to buy some vegetables, and I managed to recall everything without writing it down.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your point with specific reasons using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I do make lists for my work, and they usually help me stay organised. However, sometimes my tasks are complex, so I find it challenging to remember everything even with notes.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Use clear linking words to structure your ideas and provide specific reasons. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and complete.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they are confident in their memory and prefer to remember things naturally. On the other hand, others might find lists unhelpful or time-consuming.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are fluent.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient when I go shopping. Since I have my phone with me, I can easily check the list without carrying extra paper.

× I didn't make a list.

✓ I didn't make a list.

The sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a past event, so no correction is needed.

× For example, my mom told me to buy some vegetables last week on.

✓ For example, my mom told me to buy some vegetables last week.

The phrase 'last week on' is incorrect and unnecessary. The preposition 'on' should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× And when I went to the market adjusts remember everything rather than note those in lists.

✓ And when I went to the market, I try to remember everything rather than note those in lists.

The word 'adjusts' is incorrect here and disrupts sentence structure. It should be replaced with 'I try to' to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Uh, you really make a list when I'm working and always see it.

✓ Uh, I really make a list when I'm working and always see it.

The subject 'you' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I' to match the speaker. Also, 'really make' is acceptable here as a modal-like emphasis, so no change needed there.

× Worse, it's works.

✓ Worse, it works.

The phrase 'it's works' is incorrect because 'works' is a verb and 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is'. The correct form is 'it works'.

× The cause? My work is a little difficult for me and actually remember a lot of things, so make a note is very difficult useful for me to remember.

✓ The reason is that my work is a little difficult for me and I actually have to remember a lot of things, so making notes is very useful for me to remember.

The original sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'I' before 'actually remember' and changing 'make a note' to 'making notes' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× In my opinion, on the one hand, maybe some people are very clever to.

✓ In my opinion, on the one hand, maybe some people are very clever.

The phrase 'clever to' is incorrect; 'clever' is an adjective and does not require 'to' after it. Removing 'to' corrects the sentence.

× Remember everything and on the other hand someone may have tried may try to do some list to help them remember something that is.

✓ Remember everything, and on the other hand, someone may have tried or may try to make a list to help them remember something.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repeated modal verbs 'may have tried may try'. Also, 'do some list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× Yeah, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used here to indicate the device, so no correction is needed.

× Be 'cause all well I'm go shopping.

✓ Because when I go shopping,

The phrase 'Be 'cause all well I'm go shopping' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be corrected to 'Because when I go shopping,' to make sense and fit the context.

× If I read everyone, if I write everything on my phone, I just take one phone to buy something.

✓ If I write everything on my phone, I just take my phone to buy something.

The phrase 'If I read everyone' is incorrect and unclear. Removing it and simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.