List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'award important'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me focus on buying only the important items. This way, I avoid wasting money and time on unnecessary things.

제안: Your answer should be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors.

예시: Yes, I usually make a work list because it helps me remember my tasks for the week or month. Therefore, I can stay well organized and complete my work on time.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and repetitive. Try to clearly state reasons why some people avoid lists, using linking words like 'because' or 'since'. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on specific reasons.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. Also, they believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Please organize your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. Clearly state your preference and reasons, using linking words to connect your points.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere easily. Sometimes, I forget paper lists at home, so using my phone is more convenient.

× Yes, because I think it's helped me to see things which are award important for me and I don't do shopping the uselessly and spend time mostly on other things which are not. Useful for me.

✓ Yes, because I think it has helped me to see things which are more important for me and I don't shop uselessly and spend time mostly on other things which are not useful for me.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' to correctly use the present perfect tense. 'Award important' is incorrect; it should be 'more important' to express comparison. 'Do shopping the uselessly' is incorrect; it should be 'shop uselessly' as 'do shopping' is not standard and 'uselessly' is an adverb modifying the verb. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I usually make a list item for my work because I think it helped me to recognize all the things which I have to remember that what I have to do then next week, the next month or I can be a well organized.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I think it helps me to recognize all the things I have to remember, what I have to do next week or next month, so I can be well organized.

The verb 'helped' should be 'helps' to match the present tense context. 'Make a list item' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness, removing unnecessary words and correcting tense usage.

× Yes, some people don't like to make a list that they don't think that it's important to make a list.

✓ Yes, some people don't like making a list because they don't think it's important to make one.

The phrase 'don't like to make' is acceptable but 'don't like making' is more natural here. The sentence is simplified for clarity. Also, 'that they don't think that' is redundant; 'because they don't think' is clearer.

× It's just everything that it is a time consuming and some people are like.

✓ They think it's just time-consuming, and some people believe they can remember the tasks without a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses 'and some people are like' incorrectly. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper conjunctions and clearer meaning. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× They can recognize the things they have to do the work or task something, so this is not important for them.

✓ They can recognize the things they have to do, such as work or tasks, so making a list is not important for them.

The phrase 'do the work or task something' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It is corrected to 'do, such as work or tasks' for clarity. Also, 'this is not important for them' is vague; specifying 'making a list is not important for them' clarifies the meaning.

× I don't make a list on a phone because I prefer that for I can't explode everywhere wherever I want.

✓ I don't make a list on my phone because I prefer it; I can't access it everywhere I want.

'On a phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'I prefer that for I can't explode everywhere' is incorrect; 'I prefer it; I can't access it everywhere' is the correct expression. 'Explode' is a wrong word choice here; 'access' fits the context.

× Sometimes I forgot the paper on the important dates where I'll read the waist ready much Then it's not good to have on a paper rather than I'd like to be in the phone so I can use it every.

✓ Sometimes I forget the paper with important dates, so I can't read it properly. It's not good to have it on paper; I'd rather have it on my phone so I can use it anytime.

'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. The sentence is restructured for clarity. 'Waist ready much' is incorrect and replaced with 'can't read it properly'. 'Rather than I'd like to be in the phone' is corrected to 'I'd rather have it on my phone'. The sentence is completed properly.