List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达自己的观点。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to ensure I don't forget anything.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks one by one efficiently.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误明显。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or think it wastes their time.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不清晰。建议用完整句子表达偏好，并说明理由。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit whenever I need.

× Do you make list from shop?

✓ Do you make a list when you shop?

这里缺少冠词'a'，因为'list'是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× Yes, of course I want make a list for my work because I think make lesser you very effective.

✓ Yes, of course I want to make a list for my work because I think making a list makes you more effective.

动词'want'后面需要加不定式'to make'，而且表达'更有效'时应使用比较级'more effective'，'make lesser you'表达不正确。

× Yes, of course I want make a list for my work because I think make lesser you very effective.

✓ Yes, of course I want to make a list for my work because I think making a list makes you more effective.

动词' think'后面接动名词形式'making'，而不是动词原形。

× It can let me know what I should do. 1 by 1.

✓ It can let me know what I should do, one by one.

数字'1'应写为单词形式'one'，且表达习惯用'one by one'。

× Also, maybe they think it's very. Difficult or waste their time.

✓ Also, maybe they think it's very difficult or a waste of their time.

句子结构不完整，'very'后面应直接跟形容词'difficult'，'waste'应改为名词短语'a waste of'。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I think it's easy to log my letter next a very. Easy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to log my letters next, which is very easy.

'list'前缺少冠词'a'，'letter'应为复数形式'letters'，句子表达不连贯，需调整。