List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several grammatical errors and mispronunciations (e.g., 'Alyssa' instead of 'a list', 'stuff' instead of 'staff'). To improve, focus on clear sentence structure, correct vocabulary, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Usually, I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop spontaneously. I like to check what I need while I'm in the store, as sometimes the staff give me useful recommendations. This way, I can save both money and time.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. To improve, use simple and correct sentence structures, and organise your ideas clearly. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your vocabulary is accurate and relevant.

예시: I usually make a to-do list at work because it helps me keep track of all the tasks I need to complete. Since I don't have a good memory, the list reminds me of my responsibilities and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer has some good ideas but is affected by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and connect your ideas with linking words for better coherence.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a strong memory and feel confident they can remember everything without writing it down. Additionally, they might think that writing lists is a waste of time and prefer to focus directly on their tasks.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete thoughts. To improve, express your preference clearly with supporting reasons, use correct vocabulary, and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of touching the paper. It helps me remember things better than using my phone.

× But usually I don't make Alyssa when I shop.

✓ But usually I don't make a list when I shop.

The word 'Alyssa' seems to be a typographical error for 'a list'. Correcting it to 'a list' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I like to check what I need while I'm in the store as sometimes I get a recommendation from the stuff.

✓ I like to check what I need while I'm in the store as sometimes I get a recommendation from the staff.

The word 'stuff' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'staff' meaning employees. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects sentence correctness.

× So is better for me save money and save time.

✓ So it is better for me to save money and save time.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and the infinitive marker 'to' before 'save'. Adding these corrects the sentence structure.

× I usually make A to do list when I works because the keep keep track of all the tasks I need to complete and since I don't have a good memory and the list reminds me of my responsibility and I sure I don't forget anything important in this match.

✓ I usually make a to-do list when I work because it helps me keep track of all the tasks I need to complete. Since I don't have a good memory, the list reminds me of my responsibilities and ensures I don't forget anything important in this match.

Several errors: 'A' should be lowercase 'a'; 'to do list' should be hyphenated 'to-do list'; 'works' should be 'work' (subject-verb agreement); 'the keep keep' is incorrect and replaced with 'it helps me keep'; run-on sentence corrected by splitting; 'responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities'; 'I sure' changed to 'ensures' for clarity.

× The words wasn't for me is my Morkies organize.

✓ The words weren't for me; it is my way to organize.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Assuming the intended meaning is that the words weren't helpful and the speaker has their own way to organize, the sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Making lists. Some people who do not like making lists because they have a strong memory and feel confident they can remember everything with our writing down.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they have a strong memory and feel confident they can remember everything without writing it down.

The sentence fragment 'Making lists.' is incomplete and removed. 'with our writing down' is incorrect; corrected to 'without writing it down' for proper meaning and grammar.

× Additionally, they may might think probably the writing leaks there is a waste of time and prefer to focus on task directly rather than spending time organizing them.

✓ Additionally, they might think that writing lists is a waste of time and prefer to focus on tasks directly rather than spending time organizing them.

'may might' is redundant; choose one modal verb 'might'. 'probably' is unnecessary here. 'the writing leaks' is incorrect; corrected to 'writing lists'. 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match context.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I like the feeling when I touch the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like the feeling of touching the paper.

The phrase 'the feeling when I touch the paper' is awkward; 'the feeling of touching the paper' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× I prefer under percent something there arc and touched the AEI or or use the phone.

✓ I prefer using paper rather than the phone.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases. Assuming the intended meaning is a preference for paper over phone, the sentence is corrected accordingly.