List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list when I go to department stores because it helps me find items in an orderly way. It saves me time and prevents confusion when there are many things to buy.'

예시: I always make a shopping list when I go to department stores because it helps me find items in an orderly way. It saves me time and prevents confusion when there are many things to buy.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar by structuring your answer properly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'To be honest, I usually don't make lists for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously and handle tasks as they come. However, when I was studying at school, I found making lists very helpful to organize my studies and divide my curriculum into manageable parts each day.'

예시: To be honest, I usually don't make lists for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously and handle tasks as they come. However, when I was studying at school, I found making lists very helpful to organize my studies and divide my curriculum into manageable parts each day.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve fluency. Use linking words and correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory to organize their work or study. They find it easier and faster to remember tasks without writing them down, so they think making lists is unnecessary and boring.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory to organize their work or study. They find it easier and faster to remember tasks without writing them down, so they think making lists is unnecessary and boring.

제안: Clarify your ideas and correct vocabulary mistakes. Avoid contradictions and incomplete sentences. For example, say 'To me, it doesn't really matter whether I make a list on paper or on my phone because both are convenient and portable. However, I usually prefer using my phone because it is always with me and more comfortable to use.'

예시: To me, it doesn't really matter whether I make a list on paper or on my phone because both are convenient and portable. However, I usually prefer using my phone because it is always with me and more comfortable to use.

× Yes, of course I do shopping list when I got to department stores because it helps me to find my orders in orderly not and it really I find it really helpful.

✓ Yes, of course I do a shopping list when I go to department stores because it helps me to find my orders in an orderly way and I find it really helpful.

The phrase 'do shopping list' is incorrect; it should be 'do a shopping list' to indicate a singular countable noun. 'Got' should be 'go' to match present tense. 'Orderly not' is incorrect; it should be 'in an orderly way' to express manner properly.

× It saves me my service, my time properly and it doesn't makes me confuse it when it's too many things.

✓ It saves me time properly and it doesn't make me confused when there are too many things.

'Doesn't makes' is incorrect; after 'doesn't' the base form 'make' should be used. 'Confuse it' is incorrect; the adjective 'confused' should be used to describe the state. 'It's too many things' should be 'there are too many things' to correctly express existence.

× To be honest, I usually do it make a list for my work because I preferred to work spontaneously and handle task as they come.

✓ To be honest, I usually don't make a list for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously and handle tasks as they come.

'Do it make' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make'. 'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'as they come'.

× However, when I was standing at school I find it. Very helpful to make list to organize my studies and divide my curriculum into manageable parts each day.

✓ However, when I was studying at school I found it very helpful to make lists to organize my studies and divide my curriculum into manageable parts each day.

'Was standing' is incorrect in this context; 'was studying' fits better. 'Find' should be past tense 'found' to match 'was studying'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural and article usage.

× Some people don't like making lists because they preferred to rely on their memory to organize their work or study.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory to organize their work or study.

'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense indicated by 'don't like'.

× They find it easier and faster to remember task without writing down them.

✓ They find it easier and faster to remember tasks without writing them down.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match context. 'Writing down them' is incorrect; the correct order is 'writing them down'.

× So they they think they're making list is unnecessary.

✓ So they think making lists is unnecessary.

Repeated 'they' is a redundancy. 'They're making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' without 'they're' to form a correct noun phrase.

× To me, it doesn't matter really it whether I make a list on paper or on my phone because both are inconvenient and portable, you know?

✓ To me, it doesn't really matter whether I make a list on paper or on my phone because both are convenient and portable, you know?

'It doesn't matter really it whether' is awkward; 'it doesn't really matter whether' is correct. 'Inconvenient' is opposite of intended meaning; 'convenient' fits better.

× However, I usually prefer using my fun because it's more portable an it's more comfortable and it's, you know, my fan always with me.

✓ However, I usually prefer using my phone because it's more portable and it's more comfortable, and, you know, my phone is always with me.

'Fun' and 'fan' are incorrect words; the intended word is 'phone'. Missing 'and' and 'is' needed for correct sentence structure.