List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单清晰的句子，并且避免重复。可以用连接词来使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I buy everything I need quickly.

제안: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议你先明确身份，然后说明做清单的目的和效果，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I am a student, so I always make a list when I study. It helps me organize my tasks and finish everything on time.

제안: 你的回答不清楚且语法错误较多。建议你用简单句表达观点，说明原因，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy or they think lists don't help. Also, lazy people may ignore their lists.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议你用简单句表达偏好，说明原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it most of the time. I always carry my phone to school, so I can check my list anytime easily.

× It helped me save lot of times and just buy everything's right away.

✓ It helped me save a lot of time and just buy everything right away.

The phrase 'lot of times' should be 'a lot of time' because 'time' is uncountable here. Also, 'everything's' is incorrect; it should be 'everything' as a pronoun without possessive form.

× I am not looking in nails and I am currently a student so I always make a list when I'm studying.

✓ I am not working in nails and I am currently a student so I always make a list when I'm studying.

The phrase 'looking in nails' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'working in nails' to indicate occupation or field.

× Making a list helps me to organize better an have unhappy ideas on what I should do and what I shouldn't do.

✓ Making a list helps me to organize better and have clear ideas on what I should do and what I shouldn't do.

The phrase 'unhappy ideas' is incorrect; it should be 'clear ideas' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'an' should be 'and'.

× It committed to finish, everything's on time.

✓ I am committed to finishing everything on time.

The sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'It committed' is incorrect; 'I am committed' is correct. Also, 'everything's' should be 'everything' without possessive form.

× I believe there's so many people still like to mail is especially for.

✓ I believe there are so many people who still like to make lists, especially for...

'There's' is singular but refers to 'many people' which is plural; it should be 'there are'. Also, 'mail is' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'.

× The people who are really busy, some people don't have enough self-control ability if that they believe that meeting list doesn't help any things and.

✓ Some people who are really busy don't have enough self-control and believe that making lists doesn't help anything.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'If that they believe' is incorrect; it should be 'and believe'. 'Meeting list' should be 'making lists'. 'Any things' should be 'anything'.

× If people are lazy they will just literally skip the lissan do anything else.

✓ If people are lazy, they will just literally skip the list and do something else.

'Lissan' is a typo for 'list'. 'Do anything else' should be 'do something else' to make sense.

× I used my phone's most times.

✓ I use my phone most of the time.

'Used' is past tense but context suggests present. 'Most times' should be 'most of the time'. Also, 'phone's' is incorrect possessive form here.

× Much time stand using paper.

✓ I spend much less time using paper.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrect. 'Much time stand using paper' is incorrect; it should be 'I spend much less time using paper' to express the intended meaning.

× I go to school everyday with my phone and every times I checked my phones I can see the other things.

✓ I go to school every day with my phone and every time I check my phone, I can see other things.

'Everyday' is an adjective; 'every day' is the correct adverb. 'Every times' should be 'every time'. 'Checked' should be 'check' to match present tense. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone'. 'The other things' should be 'other things'.