List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to speak more clearly and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and unclear words like 'shocked' and 'nursery'.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me organize my purchases better. For example, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, so I can save money and time.

제안: Focus on clear pronunciation and grammar. Begin with a direct answer, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'cool safe time' and 'in my lease on the orders'.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me save time and organize my tasks better. I usually write down the most important jobs first so I can finish them on time.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they don't know how to organize their time. For example, I learned from my sister to prioritize important tasks first and do less urgent ones later.

제안: Speak more clearly and complete your sentences. Start with a direct answer, then explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unclear words like 'Harvey' and incomplete thoughts.

예시: It depends on the situation. When I have time, I prefer to write my list on paper because it helps me remember better. However, if I am in a hurry, I use my phone to make a list so I can access it easily.

× Is I do my at least when I'm shocked when I do my groceries or when I go to any other store.

✓ I do my list at least when I'm shocked, when I do my groceries or when I go to any other store.

The pronoun 'Is I' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs reordering for clarity.

× So it can help me to organize my buying better.

✓ So it can help me organize my buying better.

The phrase 'help me to organize' is acceptable but 'help me organize' is more natural and concise in English.

× Also it's also preventing me to buy something that is not a nursery for me for example.

✓ Also, it prevents me from buying something that is not necessary for me, for example.

Incorrect use of 'preventing me to buy' should be 'prevents me from buying'. Also, 'nursery' is incorrect; the intended word is 'necessary'.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work and it does work by listing my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and it works by helping me organize my tasks.

The phrase 'it does work by listing my work' is awkward; 'it works by helping me organize my tasks' is clearer and more natural.

× I cool safe time and also organize my days better as in my lease on the orders I will write something that is very necessary to finish it.

✓ I can save time and also organize my days better as in my list of orders I write down what is very necessary to finish.

'cool safe time' is incorrect; it should be 'can save time'. 'lease on the orders' is incorrect; it should be 'list of orders'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I think that be 'cause they don't have someone to help.

✓ I think that's because they don't have someone to help them.

The phrase 'be 'cause' is informal and incomplete; 'that's because' is correct. Also, 'help' needs an object 'them'.

× Then how to organize your days.

✓ Then they don't know how to organize their days.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. The correction completes the sentence meaningfully.

× As for me, my sister had me.

✓ As for me, my sister helped me.

'had me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'helped me'.

× My sister also taught me how to organize my time and to do something that is necessary 1st and followed by there something that is not very urgent to finish so.

✓ My sister also taught me how to organize my time and to do something that is necessary first, followed by something that is not very urgent to finish.

'there something' is incorrect; it should be 'something'. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Actually, it depends on the situations when I'm not really in a. Harvey then I will write it on a paper.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation. When I'm not really in a hurry, then I will write it on paper.

'situations' should be singular 'situation' here. 'in a. Harvey' is a mishearing or typo for 'in a hurry'. 'on a paper' should be 'on paper'.

× So it's cool, it's cool. Help me to remember better what to do any If I'm in like in urgent situations, then I'm right on my phone so I can.

✓ So it helps me remember better what to do. If I'm in urgent situations, then I write on my phone so I can.

'cool, it's cool' is informal and unclear. 'Help me to remember better' is better as 'helps me remember better'. 'right' should be 'write'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.