List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the market because it helps me remember essential items. For instance, I usually list the groceries I need to buy to ensure I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and incorrect word usage. Focus on structuring your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks. It helps me organise my duties and manage my time effectively, especially when I have to handle different projects in various departments.

제안: Your answer has some good ideas but is not expressed clearly. Use complete sentences and explain reasons logically with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

예시: Some people prefer not to make lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. However, I believe that making lists makes life more convenient and helps us manage our tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary words and focus on relevant details.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier and more convenient. I can quickly type items and carry my phone anywhere, which helps me manage shopping and work tasks efficiently.

× I always make shopping list when I go to the market, so it helps me to recall or essential items.

✓ I always make a shopping list when I go to the market, so it helps me to recall essential items.

The noun 'shopping list' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'or' is incorrect here; it should be omitted to correctly connect the phrase 'recall essential items'.

× I make the list of the groceries which I want to buy.

✓ I make a list of the groceries that I want to buy.

The phrase 'make the list of' is better expressed as 'make a list of'. Also, 'which' is less appropriate than 'that' in restrictive clauses in spoken English. The article 'a' is more suitable here than 'the' because the list is not previously specified.

× Yeah, of course I make list for my work for.

✓ Yeah, of course I make lists for my work too.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it implies multiple lists for different tasks. Also, 'for' at the end is incorrect and should be replaced with 'too' to mean 'also'.

× The kinds of work like what to do in. Different division time managing sed rate.

✓ The kinds of work, like what to do in different divisions and time management, are set rates.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey that different divisions have set rates for time management tasks. Proper conjunctions and articles are necessary for clarity.

× It is really helpful to manage their time while doing work such as.

✓ It is really helpful to manage one's time while doing work.

The pronoun 'their' is vague here; 'one's' is more appropriate to refer generally to a person. The phrase 'such as' is incomplete and should be omitted or followed by examples.

× There are preferences for some people who don't want to make lists by it.

✓ Some people prefer not to make lists.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Simplifying it to 'Some people prefer not to make lists' conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× I strongly believe making list makes more life more convenient and easy.

✓ I strongly believe making lists makes life more convenient and easy.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. Also, 'makes more life more convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'makes life more convenient'.

× We can manage our things by making listing.

✓ We can manage our things by making lists.

'Making listing' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'making lists'.

× I prefer to make list on my phone, should be 'cause it's quite easier and simply we can.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's quite easier and we can simply do it.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists'. 'Should be 'cause' is informal and incorrect here; 'because' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Just type in. Travel. My take my phone and make a list too for any shopping purpose or work needs making.

✓ I just type in. I take my phone and make a list for any shopping or work needs.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into complete sentences for clarity and correctness.