List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct phrases like "check our boxes" to "check boxes" and improve sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I am quite forgetful, so I usually create a shopping list on my phone's To Do List app. Then, while shopping, I tick the check boxes to mark the items I have already bought.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid fragmented sentences and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, explain how AI helps you more specifically.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Recently, I have been using AI tools like ChatGPT to help me create these lists more easily. This approach makes me more productive and efficient.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Avoid short fragmented sentences and use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' properly. Also, try to answer the question directly by explaining reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or restrictive. Personally, I like making lists because firstly, it helps me remember tasks, and secondly, it gives me a clear plan of what to do next.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, avoid abrupt sentence endings.

예시: I prefer making work-related lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts that way. However, for shopping lists, I use my phone since it is more convenient to carry when I go shopping.

× Yes, I'm a big forgetful person so I first create a list in my To Do List of the phone and then go shopping.

✓ Yes, I'm a very forgetful person, so I first create a list in the To Do List on my phone and then go shopping.

The phrase 'big forgetful person' is incorrect; 'very forgetful person' is the correct expression. Also, 'in my To Do List of the phone' is incorrect; it should be 'in the To Do List on my phone' to correctly indicate location and possession.

× So I use also check our boxes to tick mark the things that I have already bought.

✓ So I also use checkboxes to tick off the things that I have already bought.

The phrase 'use also check our boxes' is incorrect. It should be 'also use checkboxes' to correctly place the adverb and use the correct noun. 'Tick mark' is better expressed as 'tick off' in this context.

× Now it is I'm here taking the help of AI that you've GPT to make a list for me which is more easier.

✓ Now I am using the help of AI, like ChatGPT, to make a list for me, which is easier.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect pronoun use. 'Now it is I'm here taking the help' is incorrect; it should be 'Now I am using the help'. 'You've GPT' is incorrect; it should be 'ChatGPT'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is correct.

× Many people like making lists. Personally I do like making lists because firstly. EI don't for get. What to do next? Secondly, it gives me a clear idea of what I can do next.

✓ Many people like making lists. Personally, I do like making lists because, firstly, I don't forget what to do next. Secondly, it gives me a clear idea of what I can do next.

The sentence has punctuation and spacing errors. 'EI don't for get' should be 'I don't forget'. Also, the sentence fragments should be combined properly for clarity.

× I prefer making a list of my works on paper and list off. What to shop in my phone? Because carrying a phone is easier when going shopping.

✓ I prefer making a list of my work on paper and a shopping list on my phone because carrying a phone is easier when going shopping.

'My works' is incorrect; 'my work' is the correct singular uncountable noun. 'List off. What to shop in my phone?' is fragmented and unclear; it should be 'a shopping list on my phone'. The sentence should be combined for clarity.