List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、より自然な表現に改善できます。例えば、"I always check the inside of our refrigerator before I go shopping, so I already know what I want to buy."のように簡潔にすると良いでしょう。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list. Instead, I check the inside of our refrigerator before shopping, so I already know what I need to buy.

제안: 文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。より明確で自然な表現にするために、"It depends on the kind of tasks I have. If I have many small tasks, I make a list to keep track of them. But if I have only one big task, I don't need a list."のように整理しましょう。

예시: It depends on the kind of tasks I have. If I have many small tasks, I make a list to keep track of them. But if I have only one big task, I don't need a list.

제안: 内容は理解できますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、論理的なつながりを強化するために接続詞を使うと良いです。例えば、"In my opinion, when people have many tasks, it can be difficult to organize which ones are finished. Therefore, they make lists to avoid forgetting tasks they need to do."のように表現しましょう。

예시: In my opinion, when people have many tasks, it can be difficult to organize which ones are finished. Therefore, they make lists to avoid forgetting tasks they need to do.

제안: 意味が伝わりにくく、語彙や文法の誤りが多いです。より自然で明確な表現にするために、"I prefer to make lists on paper because I can check tasks off with a pencil or pen, which makes it easy to see which tasks are finished."のように言い換えましょう。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can check tasks off with a pencil or pen, which makes it easy to see which tasks are finished.

× I always check check the inside our refrigerator before I go to shopping so I know already I what I want to buy.

✓ I always check the inside of our refrigerator before I go shopping so I already know what I want to buy.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'check' which is a typographical error. Also, 'inside our refrigerator' needs the preposition 'of' to be correct. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. The phrase 'I know already I what I want to buy' is incorrectly ordered; the correct order is 'I already know what I want to buy'. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I always check check the inside our refrigerator before I go to shopping so I know already I what I want to buy.

✓ I always check the inside of our refrigerator before I go shopping so I already know what I want to buy.

The phrase 'inside our refrigerator' requires the preposition 'of' to indicate possession or location correctly. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is followed by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Correct preposition usage is essential for natural and grammatically correct English.

× I should say is depend on what kind of task I had.

✓ I should say it depends on what kind of task I have.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the verb 'is depend'. The correct structure requires 'it depends'. Also, 'had' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense 'have' is appropriate. Proper sentence structure and tense agreement are necessary for clarity.

× If I had a small tasks are out, I need to make a list to check.

✓ If I have small tasks, I need to make a list to check.

The phrase 'a small tasks' incorrectly mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'tasks'. It should be either 'a small task' or 'small tasks' without 'a'. Also, 'are out' is unclear and unnecessary here. Correct singular/plural agreement and clarity improve the sentence.

× To check which task I had done.

✓ To check which tasks I have done.

The phrase 'had done' is past perfect tense, which is not appropriate here. Present perfect 'have done' is better to indicate completed tasks relevant to the present. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× If I had a small tasks are out, I need to make a list to check.

✓ If I have small tasks, I need to make a list to check.

The phrase 'a small tasks' incorrectly combines singular article 'a' with plural noun 'tasks'. It should be 'small tasks' without 'a' to maintain correct singular/plural agreement.

× However, if I had only 1 task on it is very heavy, I don't need to make a list.

✓ However, if I have only one task and it is very heavy, I don't need to make a list.

The phrase '1 task on it is very heavy' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'one task and it is very heavy'. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to match present tense context. Correct singular/plural and sentence structure are necessary.

× If I had a small tasks are out, I need to make a list to check.

✓ If I have small tasks, I need to make a list to check.

The use of past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a general or present condition. Present tense 'have' is appropriate.

× So they make a list to do not forget which task.

✓ So they make a list to not forget which tasks they need to do.

The phrase 'to do not forget' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to not forget'. Also, 'which task' should be 'which tasks they need to do' for clarity and completeness. Proper preposition and phrase structure improve meaning.

× So they make a list to do not forget which task. They need to do.

✓ So they make a list to not forget which tasks they need to do.

The pronoun 'They' starting a new sentence is unnecessary and breaks the sentence awkwardly. Combining into one sentence with correct pronouns improves flow and clarity.

× I prepare make arrest on paper because I can check by pencil, pen or pencil directory so it easy to recognize to which task you are finished.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I can check it with a pencil or pen directly, so it is easy to recognize which tasks I have finished.

The phrase 'prepare make arrest' is incorrect; likely intended 'prefer to make a list'. 'Check by pencil, pen or pencil directory' is unclear; corrected to 'check it with a pencil or pen directly'. 'It easy' lacks verb 'is'. 'To which task you are finished' is incorrect; corrected to 'which tasks I have finished'. Proper adjective/adverb use and sentence structure are necessary.