List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. It helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较简单。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my thoughts and save time. Therefore, I find this method very effective.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议练习句子结构，使用简单明了的语言表达观点。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel disappointed if they cannot complete everything on the list, so they avoid making one.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议简化句子，注意时态和连贯性。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because when I use my phone, I often get distracted and forget what I wanted to do.

× I think Mika list will help me to remember the things I want to buy an also will help me to stop. Buying some stuff I don't need.

✓ I think making a list will help me to remember the things I want to buy and also will help me to stop buying some stuff I don't need.

这里的错误是单复数问题，原句中'Mika list'应为'making a list'，因为动名词短语作主语时需要使用动名词形式。建议使用'making a list'来表达“制作清单”的意思。

× I think make a list during work helps me organize my thoughts and my ideas and make me to save time.

✓ I think making a list during work helps me organize my thoughts and my ideas and helps me save time.

这里需要使用动名词形式'making'来表示动作的进行，'make me to save time'中的'to'是不必要的，正确用法是'h helps me save time'。建议将'make'改为'making'，并去掉'to'。

× I think some people don't. Like making these? Because they fell like when they're making some ways and the. Anne. Didn't do the least. The least So they will fill uhm, how to say disappointing so they don't make it?

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel that when they make some ways and then don't do the list, they feel disappointed, so they don't make it.

原句中'these'和'least'使用错误，应为'lists'；'fell'应为'feel'；'fill'应为'feel'。代词和词汇使用不当导致句意不清。建议使用正确的代词和词汇以表达清楚意思。

× For me I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make a list on my phone, if I when I check the least on my phone I will forgot.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make a list on my phone, when I check the list on my phone, I will forget.

原句中'forgot'应为'forget'，时态错误；'least'应为'list'，拼写错误。建议注意正确使用时态和拼写。

× And finally I didn't make my. So.

✓ And finally, I didn't make my list.

原句中缺少宾语'list'，导致句子不完整。建议补充完整句子，使表达清晰。