List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更自然的句子结构，并避免重复。例如，可以直接说明不喜欢列购物清单的原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to remember what I need. Also, I like to browse freely without being limited by a list.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用清晰的句子结构，明确表达列工作清单的频率和好处，并用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a work list daily or weekly. On one hand, it helps me plan my tasks for the day, and on the other hand, it allows me to review what I have accomplished during the week.

제안: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议用完整句子表达观点，清楚说明原因，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they don't find them helpful. They prefer to remember things in their minds, and sometimes making a list doesn't improve their memory.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以用更简洁的句子表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere. It's more convenient than using paper and pen, which I might not always have with me.

× No. I'm not that kind of person making list when I go shopping 'cause I will.

✓ No. I'm not that kind of person who makes a list when I go shopping because I prefer to memorize them in my mind instead of taking one out.

The phrase 'person making list' is incorrect because 'person' should be followed by a relative clause with a verb in the simple present tense to describe habitual actions. Also, 'making list' lacks an article and proper verb form. Using 'who makes a list' correctly describes the person and action.

× No. I'm not that kind of person making list when I go shopping 'cause I will.

✓ No. I'm not that kind of person who makes a list when I go shopping because I prefer to memorize them in my mind instead of taking one out.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article leads to ungrammatical expression.

× No. I'm not that kind of person making list when I go shopping 'cause I will.

✓ No. I'm not that kind of person who makes a list when I go shopping because I prefer to memorize them in my mind instead of taking one out.

The phrase 'cause I will' is unclear and incorrect in this context. The modal verb 'will' is not appropriate here; instead, expressing preference with 'prefer to' is more suitable.

× I think list will limit my choices 'cause I allowed to go around and browse when I go shopping.

✓ I think a list will limit my choices because I am allowed to go around and browse when I go shopping.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, 'allowed' needs to be in the present tense with 'am' to form 'am allowed'.

× I think list will limit my choices 'cause I allowed to go around and browse when I go shopping.

✓ I think a list will limit my choices because I am allowed to go around and browse when I go shopping.

The verb 'allowed' should be in the present tense passive form 'am allowed' to agree with the present tense context.

× Oh yes, I might work list either on a daily basis or on a weekly basis.

✓ Oh yes, I might work on a list either on a daily basis or on a weekly basis.

The verb 'work' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to working on something. Also, 'work list' is incorrect; it should be 'work on a list'.

× Oh yes, I might work list either on a daily basis or on a weekly basis.

✓ Oh yes, I might work on a list either on a daily basis or on a weekly basis.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Only one hand it really helps me understand what I am going to do in the day and we should be down in a work day and on the other hand it makes me better review where I have down in a week in a better.

✓ On one hand, it really helps me understand what I am going to do in the day and what should be done in a work day, and on the other hand, it helps me better review what I have done in a week.

The phrase 'we should be down' is incorrect; it should be 'what should be done' using the past participle 'done' to indicate completed actions. Also, 'have down' should be 'have done' as the past participle of 'do'.

× Only one hand it really helps me understand what I am going to do in the day and we should be down in a work day and on the other hand it makes me better review where I have down in a week in a better.

✓ On one hand, it really helps me understand what I am going to do in the day and what should be done in a work day, and on the other hand, it helps me better review what I have done in a week.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and prepositions, making it confusing. Adding 'On one hand' and 'on the other hand' clarifies the contrast. Also, restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think one reason is that people don't find it helpful. Making a list and.

✓ I think one reason is that people don't find making a list helpful.

The phrase 'Making a list and.' is incomplete and incorrect. Using 'making a list' as a gerund phrase correctly functions as the object of 'find'.

× I think one reason is that people don't find it helpful. Making a list and.

✓ I think one reason is that people don't find making a list helpful.

The sentence fragment 'Making a list and.' is incomplete and disrupts sentence flow. Combining the ideas into one complete sentence improves clarity.

× They can. Remember items in their mind.

✓ They can remember items in their mind.

The period after 'can' incorrectly splits the sentence. Removing the period connects the modal verb 'can' with the main verb 'remember' properly.

× The other reason is now making list will not help them too.

✓ The other reason is that making a list will not help them either.

The phrase 'now making list' is incorrect; it should be 'that making a list'. Also, 'too' is better replaced with 'either' in negative sentences. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used here.

× The other reason is now making list will not help them too.

✓ The other reason is that making a list will not help them either.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I am taking my cell phone every day everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my cell phone everywhere every day.

The phrase 'I am taking my cell phone every day everywhere' is incorrect. The present simple tense 'I take' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'every day everywhere' is better expressed as 'everywhere every day'.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I am taking my cell phone every day everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my cell phone everywhere every day.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'make a list on my phone'. However, the phrase 'every day everywhere' is awkward; 'everywhere every day' is more natural.

× So if I want to remember something, I just use my phone.

✓ So if I want to remember something, I just use my phone.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× But if I use paper, I need to find a paper and a pen to make a list.

✓ But if I use paper, I need to find paper and a pen to make a list.

The phrase 'a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is an uncountable noun here. Removing the article 'a' before 'paper' is correct.