List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长且不连贯的表达，同时注意拼写和语法的准确性。可以尝试用简洁的句子直接表达观点，并适当补充细节。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it relaxing to browse freely. I just pick items that I like and put them in my basket without planning in advance.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议先用一句话直接回答问题，再用简洁的句子说明原因和效果，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I start my work. It helps me organize my tasks clearly and know what to do next, so I can manage my daily plan better.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达不够流畅，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。可以尝试用更具体的理由和简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and feels troublesome. They prefer to focus directly on their work instead of spending time on planning.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，同时避免拼写错误。可以用更自然的表达说明偏好和原因。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing things down. When I use my phone, I often get distracted by social apps and delay starting my work.

× An shopping just for me is in way to relax and just to find a comfy place for Tuell and I need to do is just to see if there is something I love and I just put them in my basket.

✓ Shopping just for me is a way to relax and just to find a comfy place for Tuell, and all I need to do is just to see if there is something I love and I just put it in my basket.

这里的“An shopping”错误地使用了冠词和单复数形式，应该用不可数名词“Shopping”。另外，“something”是单数，后面应使用单数代词“it”而非复数“them”。

× Yes, in my daily study I'd like to make a list before I started my working in it make me feel like my playing is really clear in I also can no I need to do next and I can handle my daily plan better just by the list.

✓ Yes, in my daily study I'd like to make a list before I start my work; it makes me feel like my plan is really clear and I also know what I need to do next, and I can handle my daily plan better just by the list.

句中“started”应为一般现在时“start”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。动词“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”，主语是“it”。“playing”应为“plan”，且“can no”应为“can know”。

× Maybe making a list takes a lot of time an it was really troublesome for them to make a list and they don't like to waste time on doing something that is not related to deer work or study and they just want to spend time on their work.

✓ Maybe making a list takes a lot of time and it is really troublesome for them to make a list, and they don't like to waste time doing something that is not related to their work or study, and they just want to spend time on their work.

“waste time on doing”应改为“waste time doing”，动词短语后不加介词“on”。“deer work”应为“their work”，代词使用错误。

× I always preferred to make a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down in.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down.

“writing things down in”中“in”多余，应去掉。

× If I make a list on my phone, sometimes I may get distracted by my phone and I may spend some time zones growing the social apps instead of immediately start my work.

✓ If I make a list on my phone, sometimes I may get distracted by my phone and I may spend some time browsing social apps instead of immediately starting my work.

“time zones growing the social apps”表达错误，应为“spend some time browsing social apps”。“immediately start”应改为“immediately starting”，动词形式错误。