List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, instead of repeating 'what I want to buy' and 'what I know to buy', you can say 'to remember what I need to buy'. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'where I can spend money or where not to spend money'; instead, say 'to manage my budget effectively'.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and manage my budget effectively. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and unnecessary spending.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, when I have many tasks, I schedule them by time to complete everything efficiently.'

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, when I have many tasks, I schedule them by time to complete everything efficiently.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear expressions like 'spontaneous catching I power'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect points. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and spontaneity. However, others find lists helpful to remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.'

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and spontaneity. However, others find lists helpful to remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrases like 'worrying any creating any mess' and 'since I old'. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always accessible. I can easily add or delete items without making a mess. Also, I worry about losing paper lists, so using my phone helps me stay organized.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always accessible. I can easily add or delete items without making a mess. Also, I worry about losing paper lists, so using my phone helps me stay organized.

× Yes I make a list when I shop becauses it helped me to remember what I want to buy an what I know to buy and it also helps me to spend where I can spend money or where not to spend money.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember what I want to buy and what I need to buy, and it also helps me to decide where I can spend money or where not to spend money.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'helped' (past tense) instead of 'helps' (present tense) to match the habitual action 'I make a list'. Also, 'becauses' is a spelling error and 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase 'what I know to buy' is unclear and corrected to 'what I need to buy'. The phrase 'helps me to spend where I can spend money or where not to spend money' is awkward and corrected to 'helps me to decide where I can spend money or where not to spend money'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and clarity in present tense usage.

× Does it work? Yes, I make a list for my work and it also helps me to maintain myself, to organize myself for.

✓ Does it work? Yes, I make a list for my work and it also helps me to manage myself and to organize myself.

The phrase 'maintain myself' is incorrect in this context; 'manage myself' is more appropriate. The sentence ends abruptly with 'to organize myself for' which is incomplete and thus corrected to 'to organize myself'. This correction improves clarity and proper verb usage.

× For instance, if I a lot I have a lot of work so I make a list what time I have to do this task and what time I had to do that task.

✓ For instance, if I have a lot of work, I make a list of what time I have to do this task and what time I have to do that task.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'have' after 'if I'. Also, 'make a list what time' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of what time'. The phrase 'what time I had to do that task' incorrectly uses past tense 'had' instead of present tense 'have' to maintain consistency. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× Yeah, some people restrict themselves to make a list before going to shop as they have a power to use their spontaneous catching I power.

✓ Yeah, some people restrict themselves from making a list before going shopping as they have the power to use their spontaneous catching power.

The phrase 'restrict themselves to make' is incorrect; it should be 'restrict themselves from making'. 'Going to shop' is corrected to 'going shopping' for proper usage. 'A power' is corrected to 'the power' as it refers to a specific ability. 'Catching I power' is unclear and corrected to 'catching power'. These corrections address preposition use and article usage.

× Like if they want to they remember easily.

✓ Like, if they want to, they remember easily.

The original sentence lacks commas to separate clauses, which affects clarity. Adding commas improves readability. No pronoun error is present, but punctuation is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× But additionally there are many people who make list before going to shop anything that will remember everything there were two buy and what not to buy.

✓ But additionally, there are many people who make a list before going shopping so that they remember everything they have to buy and what not to buy.

The phrase 'make list' needs an article 'a list'. 'Going to shop anything that will remember' is incorrect and corrected to 'going shopping so that they remember'. 'There were two buy' is incorrect and corrected to 'they have to buy'. These corrections fix pronoun use and sentence structure for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Because phone is very accessible to me an I always carry my phone with me and I can easily add or delete items with or without worrying any creating any mess.

✓ Because the phone is very accessible to me and I always carry my phone with me, and I can easily add or delete items without worrying about creating any mess.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'phone'. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. The phrase 'worrying any creating any mess' is incorrect and corrected to 'worrying about creating any mess'. These corrections fix article usage, conjunction, and preposition errors.

× And I always worry about having a paper and I can lose a pepper anytime.

✓ And I always worry about having a paper, and I can lose a paper anytime.

The word 'pepper' is a typo and should be 'paper'. The sentence also benefits from a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. These corrections fix typographical and punctuation errors.

× So using my phone helps me to stay organized since I old.

✓ So using my phone helps me to stay organized since I was old.

The phrase 'since I old' is missing the verb 'was' to indicate past tense. Correcting to 'since I was old' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.