List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 侬个回答弗清爽，句子结构乱，意思表达弗明确。建议侬用简单明了个句子，直接回答问题，讲清楚侬是否做购物清单，搭配具体例子。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: 侬个回答内容混乱，弗直接回答问题，句子不连贯。建议侬先明确回答是否做工作清单，再说明清单是否有效，最后用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it works well because it helps me organize my time and complete tasks efficiently.

제안: 侬个回答简单，内容太少。建议侬扩展理由，讲讲为什么有些人喜欢用脑子记，可能觉得方便或者不喜欢写东西。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their head, thinking it's faster and more flexible than writing everything down.

제안: 侬个回答有语法错误，表达不清楚。建议侬明确说出偏好，并解释原因，比如纸质清单方便修改。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to write and erase quickly, which helps me update my list as needed.

× Call because when it struck by just do you like to see I want to buy it and grabbing a shopping bikes.

✓ I make a list because when I go shopping, I like to see what I want to buy and grab the shopping bags.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear and grammatically correct form, using appropriate verb tenses and articles.

× Call because when it struck by just do you like to see I want to buy it and grabbing a shopping bikes.

✓ I make a list because when I go shopping, I like to see what I want to buy and grab the shopping bags.

The phrase 'a shopping bikes' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'shopping bags' without 'a' to match plural form.

× And yes, when I'm study I just make a list of the time I'm studying.

✓ And yes, when I'm studying, I just make a list of the time I'm studying.

The verb 'study' should be in the present participle form 'studying' after 'I'm' to indicate the continuous tense.

× And what, you're salty like English?

✓ And what, do you like English?

The phrase 'you're salty like English' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the student intended to ask if the examiner likes English. The correction uses the correct pronoun and verb to form a proper question.

× Because they have a list in their head.

✓ Because they have a list in their heads.

The phrase 'in their head' should be plural 'heads' to agree with the plural pronoun 'they'.

× I prefer that Michael is on the paper because it's work nights and I can erase quickly.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because it works well and I can erase quickly.

The original sentence uses 'that Michael is on the paper' which is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses correct pronouns and verbs.