List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list so that I don't forget anything important. For example, I include groceries and household items. This helps me shop efficiently and saves time.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain your method with supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I don't usually make a list for work because I prefer to remember my tasks. However, I plan my day mentally to stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant words.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they prefer to rely on their memory. Although lists help with organization, many find them unnecessary or inconvenient.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to express your preference clearly with reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and complete your sentences.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because technology is widely used today. It allows me to check off tasks easily and carry my list wherever I go, which is very convenient.

× Yes, I usually make a list going for shopping so that I will not forget anything about the list of the swapping Sandy groceries.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when going shopping so that I will not forget anything on the list of the shopping sandy groceries.

The phrase 'make a list going for shopping' is incorrect because 'going' should be preceded by 'when' to indicate the time of making the list. The correct form is 'make a list when going shopping'. Also, 'about the list of the swapping Sandy groceries' is unclear; it should be 'on the list of the shopping sandy groceries' to indicate items on the list.

× Which includes the most of the items.

✓ Which includes most of the items.

The phrase 'the most of the items' is incorrect; 'most of the items' is the correct form without 'the' before 'most' when referring to a majority of items.

× I don't usually make a blister from at work as I remember in my friends and I have my thought process that.

✓ I don't usually make a list at work as I remember my tasks and have my own thought process.

The word 'blister' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'list'. The phrase 'from at work' is incorrect; it should be 'at work'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I'll have my talk about what to do in my daytime.

✓ I plan what to do during my day.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'I'll have my talk about what to do in my daytime' is not a correct structure. It should be simplified to express planning daily tasks.

× So usually I don't make the list, but mostly I.

✓ So usually I don't make a list, but sometimes I do.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'But mostly I' is not a complete thought. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning.

× Is usually time-consuming's rather than.

✓ It is usually more time-consuming than other methods.

The sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. 'Is' should be 'It is' to refer to the activity. The phrase 'time-consuming's' is incorrect; 'more time-consuming' is correct.

× So user people don't wanna go for the list that they remember your bank SAN.

✓ So some people don't want to make a list because they remember everything.

The phrase 'user people' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Go for the list' is awkward; 'make a list' is better. 'Your bank SAN' is unclear and likely a mishearing; replaced with 'remember everything'.

× I was Sometimes people are making a list for organized and all, but many times they don't.

✓ Sometimes people make lists to stay organized, but many times they don't.

The sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words. 'I was' is incorrect here. The sentence should be simplified for clarity.

× Uh. Today's generations is the involve of technology in many things.

✓ Uh, today's generation is involved in technology in many things.

'Generations' should be singular 'generation' to match the verb 'is'. 'Is the involve' is incorrect; it should be 'is involved'.

× So I usually prefer to have. List on my phone and a ticket that I have done this, done this, done this in additions I love to have my mobile phone with moving so that I.

✓ So I usually prefer to have a list on my phone and tick off items as I complete them. In addition, I love to have my mobile phone with me so that I can...

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'List' should be 'a list'. 'Ticket' should be 'tick' (mark). 'In additions' should be 'in addition'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.