List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase d'introduction claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente et naturelle.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and see what is available. If I find something I like, I buy it immediately. This way, I can follow my instincts and enjoy the shopping experience.

제안: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et manque de fluidité. Commencez par répondre directement à la question, puis expliquez avec des détails précis en utilisant des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence et la clarté.

예시: I don't have a job yet, but I make lists for my studies, and they work very well. For example, when I was in senior high school, I made lists for all my exams and scheduled my study time. This method helped me stay organized and clear my mind.

제안: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre et manque de structure. Essayez de formuler une phrase d'introduction claire, puis expliquez votre idée avec des détails spécifiques et des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle et cohérente.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are not sure about their goals or what they want to achieve. Without clear objectives, it is hard to prepare a list, so they often skip this step.

제안: Votre réponse est bonne mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison pour mieux connecter vos idées. Essayez aussi d'éviter les répétitions et d'utiliser un vocabulaire plus précis.

예시: For studying, I prefer to make lists on paper because I can draw and organize my thoughts freely. However, for workouts, I use my phone since it helps keep the list neat and easy to update.

× No, I do not because comes to shopping actually like see, just look around and see what they got.

✓ No, I do not because when it comes to shopping, I actually just look around and see what they have.

The original sentence lacks the necessary preposition 'when' before 'comes to shopping' and uses 'comes' without a subject. Also, 'got' is informal and should be replaced with 'have' for correctness. The phrase 'like see' is unnecessary and confusing. The correction clarifies the sentence structure and verb usage.

× If I really like something, I'll just buy it.

✓ If I really like something, I'll just buy it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I'll just follow my mind for the flow and that's all.

✓ I'll just follow my mind and go with the flow, and that's all.

The phrase 'for the flow' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'go with the flow'. The correction replaces the incorrect phrase with the proper idiom to convey the intended meaning.

× I haven't work but for my education stuff I did and it works so well.

✓ I haven't worked, but for my education stuff, I did, and it works so well.

The verb 'work' should be in the past participle form 'worked' after 'haven't'. The sentence also benefits from added commas for clarity.

× For example when I was in Senior High School I list.

✓ For example, when I was in Senior High School, I made lists.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used in present tense; it should be past tense 'made lists' to match the past time frame. Also, 'lists' is plural to indicate multiple lists. Commas are added for clarity.

× For all of my exam, I also like to schedules things.

✓ For all of my exams, I also like to schedule things.

The noun 'exam' should be plural 'exams' to match 'all of my'. The verb 'schedules' should be base form 'schedule' after 'like to'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and verb form.

× Yeah it helps me a lot clear my mind.

✓ Yeah, it helps me a lot to clear my mind.

The verb 'clear' needs the infinitive form 'to clear' after 'helps me a lot' to be grammatically correct.

× Because. Before making a list, you have to know what you want to do and what's in your mind and most of the people can't figure it out like what's their goals and what we need to prepare for the goals.

✓ Because before making a list, you have to know what you want to do and what's in your mind, and most people can't figure out what their goals are and what they need to prepare for those goals.

The original sentence is fragmented and has awkward phrasing. 'Because.' is incomplete. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'Can't figure it out like what's their goals' is incorrect; it should be 'can't figure out what their goals are'. The correction improves sentence flow and clarity.

× So as such a process to do so people will just skip the part.

✓ So, because of such a process, people will just skip that part.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Adding commas and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For studying, I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ For studying, I prefer to make a list on paper.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Because I can draw like whatever I want.

✓ Because I can draw whatever I want.

The phrase 'like whatever I want' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. Removing 'like' corrects the sentence.

× On the paper it's more freedom for me an I'll just do like for work out, do it on my phone because it just makes the list cleaner.

✓ On paper, it's more freedom for me, and I'll just do workouts on my phone because it makes the list cleaner.

The sentence has several issues: 'On the paper' should be 'On paper'; 'an' should be 'and'; 'do like for work out' is incorrect and should be 'do workouts'; the sentence is run-on and needs commas for clarity.