List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。例如，'I think making a list helps me shop more effectively, saves time, and helps me remember what I need to buy.'

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me buy things more efficiently, saves time, and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用连贯的句子并明确表达观点。例如，'I make lists to organize my tasks, which helps me complete them step by step. It really works well and improves my efficiency.'

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks and complete them step by step. This method really improves my productivity.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰，建议简化句子并明确原因。例如，'Some people dislike making lists because seeing many unfinished tasks can make them feel stressed and overwhelmed.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because when they see many unfinished tasks, it can cause them extra pressure and stress.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达原因。例如，'I prefer making lists on paper because I get distracted by games on my phone. Writing on paper helps me focus and remember better.'

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I often get distracted by games on my phone. Writing things down on paper helps me concentrate and remember tasks more effectively.

× I think make a list well, help me buy the things more effectively and it will save my time and help me remember what I need to buy.

✓ I think making a list well helps me buy things more effectively, and it saves my time and helps me remember what I need to buy.

The verb 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' after 'think' to function as a noun phrase. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list well'. Additionally, 'the things' is better as 'things' without 'the' here.

× I think it will help me organize the things and I will finish the tasks on the. Settled steps and it really works. And help me down the jobs better.

✓ I think it will help me organize things, and I will finish the tasks in settled steps. It really works and helps me do the jobs better.

The phrase 'help me down the jobs' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me do the jobs'. Also, 'on the. Settled steps' is corrected to 'in settled steps' for proper preposition and sentence structure. 'The things' is better as 'things' here.

× I think people who don't like making lists may because it will cause extra pressure to them because when you say the least and find there so many unfinished tasks it will make you never us.

✓ I think people who don't like making lists may do so because it causes extra pressure on them. When you make a list and find there are so many unfinished tasks, it can make you feel stressed.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and unclear phrasing. 'May because' should be 'may do so because'. 'Cause extra pressure to them' should be 'cause extra pressure on them'. 'Say the least' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'Make you never us' is unclear and corrected to 'make you feel stressed' for clarity.

× I preferred you make a list on paper because I. Can't control myself. Playing games on the phone and on the paper I can write things down and in this process is also helps me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I can't control myself playing games on the phone. On paper, I can write things down, and this process also helps me.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer'. The sentence structure is fragmented and corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Is also helps me' is corrected to 'also helps me'.