List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains fragmented sentences which affect the natural flow. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries for my mum. This helps me remember exactly what I need and saves time because I don't have to wander around looking for items.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Focus on giving a clear, direct response with a topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every morning. It helps me stay organised and ensures that I meet all my deadlines on time.

제안: Your answer has some good ideas but is affected by grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer explanations. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and do things as they feel. However, I am quite organised and like to follow a daily schedule, so making lists helps me stay on track.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some minor errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid small mistakes. Also, use precise vocabulary to express your points more effectively.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more portable. Whenever I check my phone, I am reminded of the tasks I need to complete, which helps me avoid missing deadlines or forgetting important matters.

× I do make a list when I shop, for example when I'm purchasing any groceries for my mom or when I'm. Searching for address. That. I really want, so I think it is very efficient for me to make a list. When I. And looking for these specific items.

✓ I do make a list when I shop, for example, when I'm purchasing groceries for my mom or when I'm searching for an address that I really want, so I think it is very efficient for me to make a list when I am looking for these specific items.

The original sentence contains fragmented sentences and misplaced full stops, which disrupt the sentence flow and clarity. Combining the fragments into complete sentences and removing unnecessary full stops improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× The pencil and what type of less you're talking about For me I. I find a very efficient and productive to craft To Do List the moment I wake up in the morning because it ensures that I don't miss any deadlines and I complete the task before. It is being do.

✓ Regarding the pencil and the type of list you're talking about, for me, I find it very efficient and productive to craft a To-Do List the moment I wake up in the morning because it ensures that I don't miss any deadlines and I complete the tasks before they need to be done.

The original sentence has unclear prepositional phrases and incomplete sentences. Correcting prepositions and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and improves grammatical accuracy.

× I think the people who don't enjoy making Liz are what we call the spontaneous people because they wanted to do. What they feel like doing.

✓ I think the people who don't enjoy making lists are what we call spontaneous people because they want to do what they feel like doing.

The word 'Liz' is a typo for 'lists'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to match the present tense context. Removing unnecessary full stops and correcting these errors improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But for me, I'm a very organizational person and I really wanted to stick to a specific schedule that I have every day. Making list.

✓ But for me, I'm a very organised person and I really want to stick to a specific schedule that I have every day by making lists.

'Organizational' is an adjective related to organisation but 'organised' is the correct adjective to describe a person. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to maintain present tense. 'Making list' is incomplete; it should be 'making lists' or 'by making lists' to complete the thought.

× I prefer to make less on my cell phone because it is more portable an every time I just turn on my cell phone, I would be constantly reminded of the task that I have to complete everyday.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my cell phone because it is more portable and every time I just turn on my cell phone, I am constantly reminded of the tasks that I have to complete every day.

'Less' is a typo for 'lists'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Would be' is incorrect here; 'am' fits the present tense context. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. 'Everyday' as one word is an adjective; 'every day' as two words is the correct adverbial phrase here.