List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to ensure I buy everything I need."

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping to make sure I don't forget anything important. This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I always make a to-do list before work because it helps me organise my tasks and ensures I complete everything on time."

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organise my tasks effectively. As a result, I can focus on each task and complete all of them by the end of the day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it uncomfortable or unnecessary if they have few tasks to do."

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it uncomfortable or time-consuming. Also, if they have only a few tasks, they might feel it's unnecessary to write a list.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct answer and explain with specific details using linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on paper when I have it available because I find it easier to write quickly. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone instead."

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper when I have it because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone to keep my list handy.

× Well, actually, when I go shopping, I would choose to make your list first to prepare for what I'm willing or what I'm going to buy for to get.

✓ Well, actually, when I go shopping, I would choose to make my list first to prepare for what I'm willing or what I'm going to buy.

The phrase 'make your list' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own list, so the possessive pronoun should be 'my' not 'your'. Also, 'for to get' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here; the sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without it.

× Exactly there items I want to buy, yes.

✓ Exactly the items I want to buy, yes.

The word 'there' is incorrect in this context; it should be the definite article 'the' to specify particular items. This is an article error related to singular/plural usage and article choice.

× Well, actually I always makes a list before I work every day.

✓ Well, actually I always make a list before I work every day.

The verb 'makes' is incorrectly conjugated for the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'make' without the 's' ending.

× The first thing I write on my note every day is To Do List is actually make me ensure that I will complete all of the tasks I have to do A a day at I is.

✓ The first thing I write on my note every day is the To Do List, which actually helps me ensure that I will complete all of the tasks I have to do in a day.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing due to incorrect sentence structure and word order. 'To Do List is actually make me ensure' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'which actually helps me ensure'. Also, 'A a day at I is' is nonsensical and should be corrected to 'in a day'.

× I think it's very.

✓ I think it's very helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'very'. Adding an appropriate adjective like 'helpful' completes the thought.

× Personally I think the the people don't like make a lisk making a list because maybe they fight is very unconfortable or they don't have many least they don't have many tasks a day so they don't want to make some lays or we have to do.

✓ Personally, I think people don't like making a list because maybe they find it very uncomfortable or they don't have many tasks a day, so they don't want to make lists of what they have to do.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'the the people' should be 'people'; 'don't like make a lisk making a list' should be 'don't like making a list'; 'they fight is very unconfortable' should be 'they find it very uncomfortable'; 'least' should be 'tasks'; 'lays' should be 'lists'; 'we have to do' is unclear and should be 'what they have to do'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I think it depends on what the. Device I have that moment, for example, when I have paper and path right here and I will try to write on the papers and if I don't have that that that.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the device I have at that moment. For example, when I have paper and pen right here, I will try to write on the paper, and if I don't have that...

The sentence contains pronoun and article errors: 'what the. Device' should be 'the device'; 'path' is likely a typo for 'pen'; 'papers' should be singular 'paper' when referring to writing material; the sentence is incomplete but corrected for clarity and grammar up to that point.