List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，句子不完整，表达不自然。建议回答时使用完整句子，避免断断续续，表达清晰具体。

예시: Yes, I always make a clear list before shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and work more efficiently.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意语法结构，使用正确的词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer a more flexible schedule without being restricted by a list.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，清楚说明理由，并避免口语化的断句。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to edit and update the list whenever I need to.

× Yes, I always make a clear list before shopping. 'Cause I think. At least can avoid. Me. Over. Shut up.

✓ Yes, I always make a clear list before shopping because I think it can at least help me avoid overspending.

原句断句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构混乱。建议将分散的短句合并成完整句子，表达清晰完整。

× Yes I do. I think I'm a very logical person so I so love to make a working list before working. I think it is a very good way to help me sync things. Clearly.

✓ Yes, I do. I think I'm a very logical person, so I love to make a working list before working. I think it is a very good way to help me organize things clearly.

原句中“so I so love”重复使用“so”，且“sync things”用词不当，应为“organize things”。句子结构需调整，使表达更自然流畅。

× I think one reason might be they have better memory so they can ensure that they won't forget anything and the other reason I think maybe they like more flexible rig schedule. They don't want to be limited by's list.

✓ I think one reason might be that they have better memory, so they can ensure that they won't forget anything. Another reason, I think, is that they prefer a more flexible rigid schedule. They don't want to be limited by a list.

原句中缺少连接词“that”，且“rig schedule”应为“rigid schedule”，另外“by's list”错误，应为“by a list”。需要补充连接词和修正词汇。

× I prefer to make a list on phone. 'Cause I think it's easier to. Edit my list and change low.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easier to edit my list and change it.

“on phone”缺少所有格“my”，且句子断裂不完整，“change low”应为“change it”。需要补充所有格和完整表达。