List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有较多的犹豫词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，句子结构更清晰，表达更自然。

예시: Sometimes I make a shopping list when I need to buy many items because I worry I might forget something. However, I usually don't make a list for small shopping trips.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I start my work because it helps me stay organized. Since my MBTI is ISTJ, I prefer to plan everything carefully.

제안: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达含糊。建议用更明确的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work at their own pace and find lists restrictive. They may feel that lists limit their flexibility.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议减少重复，使用更准确的时态和表达方式。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing them down helps me remember my plans better. It feels like a thinking process that organizes my thoughts.

× sometimes I am afraid that I might lost something I so I seldom do it.

✓ sometimes I am afraid that I might lose something, so I seldom do it.

这里的'might'后面应该接动词原形，不能用过去式'lost'。正确用法是'might lose'。

× Definitely I will make a list when I was when I started 'cause you know, my MBTI is ISTJ, so I.

✓ Definitely I will make a list when I start, 'cause you know, my MBTI is ISTJ, so I.

这里描述的是将来或习惯动作，应该用一般现在时'start'，而不是过去时'was'。

× I'm willing to make a list that guide link my study in my work.

✓ I'm willing to make a list that guides and links my study and my work.

动词'guide'和'link'需要第三人称单数形式'guides'和'links'，且'link'后面应接并列结构'study and work'，而不是'in my work'。

× they don't want to make the list too. To obtain them and they have their own pace and on speed when they are studying or working.

✓ they don't want to make the list too. They want to maintain their own pace and speed when they are studying or working.

原句中'to obtain them'用法不当，应该表达他们想保持自己的节奏和速度，故改为'maintain their own pace and speed'。

× Well, I prefer on the paper more because I think when I when I when I was writing, reading it, when I written it down the list and my plan is already in my mind.

✓ Well, I prefer paper more because I think when I am writing or reading it, when I have written down the list, my plan is already in my mind.

'prefer on the paper'应改为'prefer paper'，'when I was writing'应改为现在进行时或一般现在时，'when I written it down'应改为完成时'have written'。