List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e boro sentence use korun, jate proshner uttor spostho hoy ebong bistarito hoy. Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache, jar karone bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shorashori dite, tarpor proyojone kichu bistarito tattho den. Linking words babohar korun jate kotha shongjog thake.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I need to buy many groceries. For example, I write down vegetables, fruits, and other essentials. This helps me remember everything and saves time at the store.

제안: Apnar uttor onek asposhto ebong bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho bhabe dite ebong kichu bistarito tattho jog korun. Linking words babohar kore kotha shongjog korun. Apnar uttor e proshner shathe somporkito tattho thaka dorkar.

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For instance, I list my study topics and cooking plans. This method works well for me as I can complete my work efficiently.

제안: Apnar uttor onek asposhto ebong bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho bhabe dite ebong kichu bistarito tattho jog korun. Linking words babohar kore kotha shongjog korun. Apni karon bole dite paren jeno uttor bhalo hoy.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or forget to check them. Also, they may feel that lists limit their flexibility in daily activities.

제안: Apnar uttor onek asposhto ebong bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho bhabe dite ebong kichu bistarito tattho jog korun. Linking words babohar kore kotha shongjog korun. Apni apnar pochondo spostho bhabe bolte paren.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry everywhere. Unlike paper lists, phone lists are less likely to be lost or damaged.

× Yeah, I I have list because lots of groceries.

✓ Yeah, I have a list because of lots of groceries.

The noun 'list' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'because lots of groceries' is incomplete; it should be 'because of lots of groceries' to indicate reason.

× I, I'm I in shopping button by measured by the shopping mall.

✓ I usually go shopping at the shopping mall.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Everywhere shopping mall is behind. My home. Mr. Big Shopping Mall.

✓ There is a big shopping mall behind my home.

The sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'There is' introduces existence, and the phrase is reordered for clarity.

× Is America list for work basically factual?

✓ I basically make a list for work.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It needs to be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I work. Hey, hello. Related. Then walk a study. Cooking it is moonwalking list.

✓ I work, study, and cook; I make a list for these activities.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be combined and clarified to express the intended meaning.

× Now Flyer. Sleeping. Don't. Keep in a Julie, Julie. Helping pad you don't people making less than why don't be 'cause I remember.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they forget or find it unhelpful.

The original sentence is incoherent and fragmented. It needs to be rewritten to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I feel her make a list on phone because. Home. List is comfort, rible is easy paper paper list no comfortable noisy was always carry allies. Alright, let's move it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is comfortable and easy. Paper lists are not comfortable and noisy to carry around.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.