List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'which is both money and time' and 'Anne'. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items. Moreover, it keeps me within my budget and prevents impulse purchases. Consequently, I save both money and time. This approach also reduces stress during shopping trips.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear sentences. Use proper sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid sentence fragments and keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. I use a mobile app that sends reminders and notifications. For example, when I check off a completed task, it gives me a sense of accomplishment. Overall, this method increases my productivity.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'motivation servants for event starting' and 'there might be over'. Try to use simple and clear sentences, and organise your ideas logically with linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because a long list of tasks can feel overwhelming and stressful. This may cause anxiety about finishing everything on time, which lowers their motivation. For example, if they think they cannot complete all tasks, they might avoid making a list to reduce pressure.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'share it with anyone ethnic' and repeated words. Use clear and complete sentences, and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it convenient. I can easily edit and rearrange items, and share the list with others. Additionally, some apps help me keep my lists well organized.

× Yes, I always make a list while shopping because it because to ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list while shopping because it helps to ensure I don't forget anything important.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'because it because' which is grammatically incorrect. The verb 'helps' is needed here to correctly express the purpose. The correction uses 'helps to ensure' which is the correct verb phrase in present tense to explain the reason.

× It also helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, which is both money and time.

✓ It also helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, which saves both money and time.

The phrase 'which is both money and time' is incorrect because 'impulse buying' cannot be equated to 'money and time'. The correct expression is 'which saves both money and time' to indicate the benefit of avoiding impulse buying.

× Anne. And it reduces time and stress during shopping clips.

✓ And it reduces time and stress during shopping trips.

The sentence contains a fragment 'Anne.' which is unrelated and likely a typo. Also, 'shopping clips' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'shopping trips'. The correction removes the fragment and corrects the noun.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work which had massive organized and focused on my task.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work which helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

The phrase 'which had massive organized' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'helps me stay organized and focused' which correctly describes the benefit of making a list. Also, 'task' is pluralized to 'tasks' to match context.

× I use a mobile app to keep track of my work list which send reminders and notifications.

✓ I use a mobile app to keep track of my work list which sends reminders and notifications.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'app' (singular), so the verb should be 'sends' (third person singular) instead of 'send'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× When for example when I check off the completed task.

✓ For example, when I check off a completed task,

The original sentence is a fragment and incorrectly structured. The correction rephrases it to a proper dependent clause starting with 'For example' and removes redundancy.

× And overall it. It helps me productivity increases.

✓ Overall, it helps increase my productivity.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× I think some people don't like making less because seeing a long list of task maybe can be quite overwhelming and stressful,

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because seeing a long list of tasks can be quite overwhelming and stressful,

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural). Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'list of'.

× and this often leads to anxiety about whether they will be able to complete everything on time, which can reduce the motivation servants for event starting.

✓ and this often leads to anxiety about whether they will be able to complete everything on time, which can reduce their motivation to even start.

The phrase 'motivation servants for event starting' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'their motivation to even start' which is grammatically correct and meaningful.

× For instance, if they believe that they won't finish all the items there might be over.

✓ For instance, if they believe that they won't finish all the items, they might avoid creating a list altogether.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought logically and grammatically.

× Avoid creating a list altogether, testing that pressure.

✓ to avoid creating a list altogether, testing that pressure.

The phrase 'Avoid creating a list altogether, testing that pressure.' is a fragment and unclear. The correction connects it properly to the previous sentence.

× I prefer making less on my phone because it is always with me which makes it more convenient.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, which makes it more convenient.

'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context.

× I can also edit and rearrange the items on my list and can share it with anyone ethnic.

✓ I can also edit and rearrange the items on my list and can share it with anyone easily.

The word 'ethnic' is incorrect in this context. Likely intended word is 'easily' or 'efficiently'. The correction uses 'easily' to make sense.

× Then. Additionally, there are few apps that make me that make my list more organized.

✓ Additionally, there are a few apps that help me make my list more organized.

The original sentence has a fragment 'Then.' and awkward phrasing 'make me that make'. The correction removes the fragment and rephrases for clarity and correctness.