List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and pronunciation errors. Use a topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by a reason with linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it easy to remember what I need. Also, I think making a list can be time-consuming, so I prefer to shop spontaneously.

제안: Improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to express your thoughts more fluently and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it challenging to organize tasks that way. Instead, I prefer to rely on my memory and handle tasks as they come.

제안: Focus on making your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your sentences are complete.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it challenging and prefer not to be restricted by a list. They might also feel that planning ahead takes away the spontaneity of shopping.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preferences and provide specific reasons. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Honestly, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me. I can easily add or remove items, and I can even share the list with my friends if needed.

× No, I don't make list when I show be 'cause I think that I can remember things easily and I also think that it is very. Difficult to make list.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I shop because I think that I can remember things easily and I also think that it is very difficult to make lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists. Also, 'show be' is a mishearing or typo for 'shop'. The sentence needs correction to 'when I shop'. The phrase 'very. Difficult' should be 'very difficult' without a period in between.

× No. I don't make list for my work 'cause it's a little bit challenging and difficult to for difficult to me to make a list for my work.

✓ No. I don't make lists for my work because it's a little bit challenging and difficult for me to make a list for my work.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general act of making lists. Also, the phrase 'to for difficult to me' is incorrect and should be 'difficult for me'.

× I prefer to work by a. By my. Great.

✓ I prefer to work by myself.

The phrase 'by a. By my. Great.' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'by myself', which is the correct reflexive pronoun and preposition usage to indicate working alone.

× I think people don't like to make Lisby 'cause they think that making list is bit challenging an they don't want to be. Really on the list date think before they go to the shop.

✓ I think people don't like to make lists because they think that making lists is a bit challenging and they don't want to rely on the list before they go to the shop.

The word 'Lisby' is a typo for 'lists'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural usage. The phrase 'be. Really on the list date think' is unclear and likely intended as 'rely on the list'. Also, 'bit' should be 'a bit' for correct quantifier usage.

× Honestly speaking, I prefer to make list on phone with 'cause it's always with me.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general act of making lists. Also, 'on phone with' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone'. The conjunction 'with' is misused here and should be replaced with 'because' to explain the reason.

× And I can also change the things from the list and I can add it everything in a I also show this list to my friend. Int.

✓ And I can also change the things on the list and I can add everything to it. I also show this list to my friend.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to modifying items on a list; 'on the list' is correct. The phrase 'add it everything in a' is incorrect; it should be 'add everything to it'. The last sentence is fragmented and should be completed as 'I also show this list to my friend.'