List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более правильные выражения и избегать повторений, а также сделать ответ более связным и логичным.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I can quickly check what I need without forgetting anything, which makes shopping more efficient.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и добавить больше деталей, используя связующие слова для плавного перехода между предложениями.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For instance, I arrange my duties in order of importance, so I can focus on the most urgent ones first, which improves my productivity.

제안: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясностей. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные предложения, а также объяснить причины более подробно и логично.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down. For example, my friend prefers to work spontaneously and feels that lists limit his flexibility.

제안: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется улучшить структуру предложений и использовать более точные выражения.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. For example, if I need to check an ingredient while shopping, I can quickly access my list, which is more convenient than using paper lists.

× I make at least when I shop because it makes my job easy.

✓ I make a list when I shop because it makes my job easy.

The phrase 'make at least' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects sentence clarity.

× So for me, take making at least is necessarily an.

✓ So for me, making a list is necessary.

The phrase 'take making at least is necessarily an' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'making a list is necessary'. This corrects the quantifier and word order errors.

× It may be useful for everyone.

✓ It may be useful for everyone.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× In my list I arrange what I am going to do next for the work and it really helps.

✓ In my list, I arrange what I am going to do next at work, and it really helps.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'at work' is the correct phrase to indicate location or context of the work.

× Some people don't like making lists because they think they don't need it.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think they don't need them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but 'lists' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number.

× They think that they can call without at least for their work or manage Ng any plan.

✓ They think that they can work without a list for their work or manage any plan.

The phrase 'call without at least' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'work without a list'. Also, 'manage Ng' seems to be a typo and should be 'manage'.

× And I have a friend which is think of this in this.

✓ And I have a friend who thinks this way.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrect for people; 'who' should be used. Also, the verb form 'is think' is incorrect; it should be 'thinks'. The phrase 'think of this in this' is unclear and corrected to 'thinks this way'.

× I prefer to make at least on the phone because I take my phone anywhere I go.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone because I take my phone anywhere I go.

The phrase 'make at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. This is a vocabulary correction.

× For example, if I need to look for any ingredient, I can quickly look it on the phone and it's very comfortable for me to use it as a list.

✓ For example, if I need to look for any ingredient, I can quickly look it up on the phone, and it's very convenient for me to use it as a list.

The phrase 'look it on the phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look it up on the phone'. Also, 'comfortable' is not the best adjective here; 'convenient' fits better.

× Meanwhile, making, at least on a paper, takes much time.

✓ Meanwhile, making a list on paper takes much time.

The phrase 'making, at least on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list on paper'. Also, 'much time' is acceptable but 'a lot of time' is more natural.