List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite natural and relevant, but try to avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences complete for clarity.

예시: Yes, I usually prepare a checklist before going grocery shopping because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. Moreover, I organise my list according to the sections of the store, which saves me time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has many pauses and incomplete sentences, which affect fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and coherently.

예시: I don't always make a list for my work because I find it difficult to stick to it. Besides, most days I don't have enough time to finish all the tasks on my list, so I avoid making one to prevent feeling upset later.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'sort of the thing' and by linking your ideas more clearly. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they prefer to be spontaneous, buying whatever catches their eye at the moment.

제안: Your answer is good but contains some incomplete sentences and filler words. Try to express your ideas in complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have enough time, I prefer to write a list on paper with a pen. However, if I'm in a hurry, I use the Notes app on my phone because it's easier to carry and I always have my phone with me, so I won't forget the list.

× Yes, actually, I do prepare a checklist before I go out for grocery shopping or you know, just shopping in general because it helps me stay. Within my budget and avoid impulse buying, and I tend to make a list according to the sections of the grocery store, so that saves time as well.

✓ Yes, actually, I do prepare a checklist before I go out for grocery shopping or, you know, just shopping in general because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, and I tend to make a list according to the sections of the grocery store, so that saves time as well.

The original sentence had an unnecessary period after 'stay' which broke the sentence incorrectly. This is a sentence structure error because the sentence was fragmented. Removing the period and connecting the phrase properly improves the flow and clarity.

× I don't always make a list for my work because it I find it a bit difficult to stick to it.

✓ I don't always make a list for my work because I find it a bit difficult to stick to it.

The phrase 'because it I find' contains an extra pronoun 'it' which disrupts sentence structure. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure error and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× And. Most days I don't even get the time to finish all of the work on my list, so I avoid making it too.

✓ Most days I don't even get the time to finish all of the work on my list, so I avoid making it too.

The sentence starts with 'And.' which is an incomplete sentence fragment. This is a sentence structure error. Removing the isolated 'And.' corrects the sentence and improves readability.

× You know not be. Upset later if I don't finish it.

✓ You know, not to be upset later if I don't finish it.

The phrase 'You know not be. Upset later' is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated, causing a sentence structure error. Correcting it to 'You know, not to be upset later' fixes the structure and meaning.

× I think most people don't enjoy making lists because it's time consuming.

✓ I think most people don't enjoy making lists because it's time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context. This is an incorrect use of adjectives issue. Using the hyphen clarifies that it is a compound adjective.