List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
I always make a list when I shop because. I am actually a very careful person when it comes to purchasing any item. Because I feel like I have to list them out if I really need it so I know what I actually need and do not buy non related things.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
I always make a list for. My work because I forget things very easily and I need a list to remind me what I need to do. Also I. I tend to procrastinate might work, so I think it. I need a list.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think it's related to, not. Liking to be pressured because having a list, it'll always remind you what to do. And some people don't like him receiving that kind of pressure, which is why, which is part possibly why they don't like having a list of work.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere rather than paper, something that is easily at last if you forget to bring it with you. It will create more difficulties for you and you can't really remember if you have bad memory.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngắt câu không tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại ý và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me focus on what I really need and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I tend to forget tasks and procrastinate. Having a list helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngắt câu, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp ý và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured by constant reminders of their tasks, which can cause stress.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngắt câu và từ dùng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, unlike paper which can be easily lost or forgotten.
문법
× I always make a list when I shop because.
✓ I always make a list when I shop because I am actually a very careful person when it comes to purchasing any item.
The sentence 'I always make a list when I shop because.' is incomplete and ends abruptly. It should be connected to the following idea to form a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error where the sentence lacks a main clause after 'because'.
× Because I feel like I have to list them out if I really need it so I know what I actually need and do not buy non related things.
✓ I feel like I have to list them out if I really need them so I know what I actually need and do not buy unrelated things.
Starting a sentence with 'Because' and continuing without a main clause leads to a sentence fragment. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'items'. 'Non related' should be 'unrelated' as one word. This is a sentence structure and word choice error.
× I always make a list for.
✓ I always make a list for my work because I forget things very easily and I need a list to remind me what I need to do.
The sentence 'I always make a list for.' is incomplete and ends abruptly. It should be connected to the following clause to form a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error.
× Also I. I tend to procrastinate might work, so I think it. I need a list.
✓ Also, I tend to procrastinate, so I think I need a list.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'might work' and 'I think it.' which do not fit. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary fragments and clarifies the meaning. This is a sentence structure error.
× And some people don't like him receiving that kind of pressure, which is why, which is part possibly why they don't like having a list of work.
✓ And some people don't like receiving that kind of pressure, which is possibly part of why they don't like having a list of work.
The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted because the subject is general 'some people'. Also, the phrase is restructured for clarity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns error.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere rather than paper, something that is easily at last if you forget to bring it with you.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere rather than paper, which is something that is easily lost if you forget to bring it with you.
The phrase 'easily at last' is incorrect; it should be 'easily lost'. Also, 'which is something' clarifies the reference to paper. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word choice error.
× It will create more difficulties for you and you can't really remember if you have bad memory.
✓ It will create more difficulties for you, and you can't really remember if you have a bad memory.
The phrase 'if you have bad memory' is missing the article 'a' before 'bad memory'. This is an article error and incorrect use of pronouns error.
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