List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use simple, correct vocabulary. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and make sure it is coherent.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting anything important and save time while shopping.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Please answer directly whether you make a list for work and explain briefly why or why not. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, I do not make a list for my work because I follow the schedule given by my school. Therefore, I do not need to prepare a separate list.

제안: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, and support it with a simple explanation. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally. They believe their memory is strong enough, so they find lists unnecessary.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains repetition. Try to express your preference clearly, explain why, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: In the past, people used paper lists, but now I prefer to make my shopping list on my mobile phone. It is convenient because I always carry my phone, and I can easily add or remove items.

× Yes, I am very addicted of making a list when I go for shopping because it helps me to learn that learn the things and good Switcher which I have to borrow from the soap and also it was the most convenient Huertos hope.

✓ Yes, I am very addicted to making a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the things and good switches which I have to borrow from the shop and also it is the most convenient way.

The phrase 'addicted of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'addicted to'. Also, 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping'. The sentence has unclear words like 'Switcher' and 'Huertos hope' which seem to be errors or mispronunciations; corrected to 'switches' and 'way' for clarity. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× It work. No, I never make a little for my work.

✓ It works. No, I never make a list for my work.

The verb 'work' needs an 's' in the present tense third person singular form 'works' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, 'little' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× As I am a student, I should work according to the institute or my school.

✓ As I am a student, I should work according to the institute's or my school's requirements.

The phrase 'work according to the institute or my school' is incomplete and unclear. Adding possessive form and 'requirements' clarifies the meaning. Prepositions and possessive forms must be used properly to convey precise meaning.

× I did not find the list tomorrow my work.

✓ I did not find the list for my work tomorrow.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'for' to link 'list' and 'my work'. Also, the placement of 'tomorrow' is corrected to the end for clarity. Proper use of prepositions and word order is important for sentence clarity.

× I think that the biggest reason why people did not like make list because it because they can easily learn that things and also their brain is so active and sort of that they can learn, they could easily learn the things which they borrow from the market.

✓ I think that the biggest reason why people do not like making lists is because they can easily remember things and their brain is so active that they can easily learn the things which they buy from the market.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Did not like make list' should be 'do not like making lists' to match the present tense context. 'Learn that things' is incorrect; 'remember things' is more appropriate. Also, 'borrow from the market' is incorrect; 'buy from the market' is correct. Correct tense usage and vocabulary improve clarity.

× Earlier we had it was only paper, but as the technology is growing vigorously day by day, I'll prefer to make my list on mobile mobile on my mobile phone because it helps me to learn the things and I will I borrow my think mobile phone every day and outside.

✓ Earlier, we only had paper, but as technology is growing vigorously day by day, I prefer to make my list on my mobile phone because it helps me remember the things and I carry my mobile phone every day when I go outside.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect prepositions. 'Make my list on mobile mobile on my mobile phone' is repetitive; corrected to 'on my mobile phone'. 'Helps me to learn the things' is better as 'helps me remember the things'. 'I will I borrow my think mobile phone' is unclear; corrected to 'I carry my mobile phone'. Proper preposition use and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.