List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear and complete sentences. Avoid incomplete thoughts and irrelevant words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, sometimes I make a shopping list, especially for groceries and household items. This helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time at the store.

제안: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your experience with making work lists. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid redundancy.

예시: I try to make lists for my work tasks, but it doesn't always work for me because I often forget to follow them. However, I find that using reminders on my phone helps me stay organized.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific reasons. Try to give clear opinions with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague expressions.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to organize their tasks mentally or find other methods that suit them better. Also, some believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more supporting details and using linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to access. Moreover, I can update the list anytime and set reminders to ensure I don't forget important tasks.

× Sometimes I do. I do make a list the software I need from the fridge from the kitchen. In general. And I am. The pharmacy to someday. Find.

✓ Sometimes I do. I make a list of the stuff I need from the fridge and the kitchen in general, and sometimes I go to the pharmacy to find things.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete structures, making it unclear. Correct sentence structure requires complete sentences with proper subjects, verbs, and objects. Also, 'software' is incorrect in this context; 'stuff' or 'things' is appropriate. The phrase 'I am. The pharmacy to someday. Find.' is fragmented and unclear; it should be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I do list. No, I don't, but I try to do it. But it doesn't work for me. I write the list for what? What I have to do? Then I wouldn't do it. So it's hard for me.

✓ I do make lists. No, I don't always, but I try to. However, it doesn't work for me. I write a list of what I have to do, but then I don't do it. So it's hard for me.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack clarity. 'I do list' is incomplete; it should be 'I do make lists.' Questions like 'I write the list for what?' are unclear and should be statements. Also, 'Then I wouldn't do it' is incorrect; it should be 'Then I don't do it' to match the intended meaning and tense.

× Usually I think as someone hold the list doesn't work for. I think. That is like better ways of. Like organizing girl stuff. And work. And maybe. People, they just remember.

✓ Usually, I think that holding a list doesn't work for some people. I think there are better ways of organizing personal stuff and work. Maybe people just remember things.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'As someone hold the list doesn't work for' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The phrase 'like organizing girl stuff' is informal and unclear; 'personal stuff' is better. Sentences should be complete and logically connected.

× I definitely prefer prefer it on my phone because it's easy. And. It's. I can easily check it whenever I want.

✓ I definitely prefer it on my phone because it's easy, and I can easily check it whenever I want.

The word 'prefer' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, fragmented sentences like 'And. It's.' should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity and correctness.