List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit redundant and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas like 'keeps me from spending too much money' and 'saves my budget' which overlap. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from overspending. I usually write it down on paper before I go to the store, which also saves me time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases like 'I have one daily life I ate'.

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me focus on my tasks and organize my plans. Sometimes I use digital apps, and other times I prefer writing on paper, depending on the situation.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and incomplete phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a more complete explanation with linking words.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember all their tasks without writing them down. Therefore, they feel lists are unnecessary for them.

제안: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing by hand. It helps me feel comfortable and remember everything better.

× Of course I am making list on the paper because I like this feeling when I write it down on the paper and it helps me feel confortable and remains everything to me.

✓ Of course I make a list on paper because I like the feeling when I write it down on paper and it helps me feel comfortable and remember everything.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'am making' instead of the simple present 'make' to express a habitual action. Also, 'remains' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'remember'. Additionally, 'confortable' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'. The phrase 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper' for natural usage.

× I write it down on paper before I go.

✓ I write it down on paper before I go shopping.

The original sentence lacks clarity about where the person goes. Adding 'shopping' clarifies the context. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'paper'.

× It helps me more recognize it and focus on what I need to do and do my plan.

✓ It helps me recognize it more and focus on what I need to do and follow my plan.

The phrase 'helps me more recognize it' is awkward; 'helps me recognize it more' is correct. Also, 'do my plan' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'follow my plan'. The pronoun usage is acceptable but the verb phrases need correction.

× I have one daily life I ate sometimes I use digital up and paper for this.

✓ In my daily life, I sometimes use digital apps and paper for this.

The phrase 'I have one daily life I ate' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'In my daily life'. 'Digital up' is likely a typo for 'digital app'. The preposition 'for this' is correctly used.

× They believe they can remember everything and do everything without without create list or checklist in an.

✓ They believe they can remember and do everything without creating a list or checklist.

The sentence has repeated 'without' and incorrect verb form 'create' after 'without'. The correct form is the gerund 'creating'. Also, 'in an' is incomplete and unnecessary here. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× it helps me feel confortable and remains everything to me.

✓ it helps me feel comfortable and remember everything.

'Confortable' is a misspelling; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. 'Remains' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'remember'. The sentence is corrected for spelling and appropriate verb usage.