List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Also, use simpler and correct vocabulary such as 'time-consuming' instead of 'time commute consuming'.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I prefer to browse freely and look for discounts, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and concise answer. Use proper sentence structure and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Explain your method clearly with linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Try to avoid unclear phrases and improve vocabulary usage.

예시: No, I don't make lists for my work because I believe time is precious. I prefer to remember my tasks and manage them according to different times of the day.

제안: Try to organize your answer logically with clear reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid unclear or repetitive phrases. Use correct vocabulary such as 'time-consuming' and 'waste of time'.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things instead. For example, they believe that relying on memory helps improve their mental skills.

제안: Answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid confusing or irrelevant statements. Use linking words to explain your preference. Also, use appropriate vocabulary and avoid negative or unclear comments about others.

예시: I don't prefer making lists either on paper or phone because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I rely on my memory to keep track of tasks.

× I usually don't like making any list because I think that it is very time commute consuming thing.

✓ I usually don't like making any list because I think that it is a very time-consuming thing.

The phrase 'time commute consuming thing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'time-consuming thing' which means something that takes a lot of time. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very time-consuming thing' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I I always like to buy a things freely an by looking the categories and the discounts.

✓ I always like to buy things freely by looking at the categories and the discounts.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'looking the categories' should be 'looking at the categories' to use the correct preposition.

× I always like to show very freely and interestingly I don't waste my time by making a list or more things because.

✓ I always like to shop very freely and interestingly; I don't waste my time by making a list or more things because.

The word 'show' is incorrect here; it should be 'shop'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation. The phrase 'or more things' is unclear but kept as is for context. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I don't like to make a list for my work because I think a time is very precious thing and I never make it to waste by making any list of more work.

✓ I don't like to make a list for my work because I think time is a very precious thing and I never waste it by making any list of more work.

The article 'a' before 'time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. Also, 'make it to waste' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'waste it'. The sentence is corrected for proper article use and verb phrase.

× I always remember that what I have to do according to time period like in morning, in an evening where I have to do like what is my recouping time but his master.

✓ I always remember what I have to do according to the time period, like in the morning or in the evening, where I have to do it, like what is my resting time, but this is difficult.

The phrase 'according to time period' needs 'the' before 'time period'. Also, 'in morning' and 'in an evening' should be 'in the morning' and 'in the evening'. The phrase 'recouping time but his master' is unclear; interpreted as 'resting time' and 'this is difficult' for clarity. Prepositions and articles are corrected.

× Will some people really don't like making list becauses it is very time consuming and I also think that it is waste of time.

✓ Well, some people really don't like making lists because it is very time-consuming and I also think that it is a waste of time.

The word 'Will' is corrected to 'Well' as an interjection. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form. 'Becauses' is corrected to 'because'. 'Waste of time' needs the article 'a' before it. The sentence is corrected for quantifiers and spelling.

× Remembering things is much better than making list.

✓ Remembering things is much better than making lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the comparison with 'things' and to be grammatically correct.

× Even arm also one of them also don't like making lists and all also think that remembering things as much better than making less and it also helps to improve our lives.

✓ Even I am also one of them; I also don't like making lists and think that remembering things is much better than making lists, and it also helps to improve our lives.

The phrase 'Even arm' is likely a mishearing of 'Even I am'. The sentence has pronoun errors and missing verbs. 'Making less' should be 'making lists'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun use and clarity.

× I don't like making list, I don't know people or in my phone because it is totally time consuming thing.

✓ I don't like making lists, whether on paper or on my phone, because it is a totally time-consuming thing.

'Making list' should be 'making lists'. 'I don't know people or in my phone' is unclear; interpreted as 'whether on paper or on my phone'. 'Time consuming thing' needs the article 'a' and hyphenation 'time-consuming'.

× It's totally a waste of time.

✓ It's totally a waste of time.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× A time is so precious.

✓ Time is so precious.

The article 'A' before 'time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article here.

× How can we wish that time by making things, making list of anything we can remember that if people if some people like I have a mental mentally problem.

✓ How can we waste that time by making things, making lists of anything? We can remember them. If some people like, I have a mental problem.

The phrase 'wish that time' is corrected to 'waste that time'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Mentally problem' corrected to 'mental problem'.