List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并且避免无关内容。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market. This helps me remember the vegetables and other items I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: 回答中有很多语法错误和表达不清楚的问题。建议你用简单句直接回答问题，并说明原因，避免重复和不相关内容。

예시: I don't usually make a list for my work because my tasks change every day. Sometimes I have meetings, and other times I need to focus on different projects.

제안: 回答不连贯，词汇使用错误，表达不清晰。建议你用简单的词汇和句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. They feel that lists limit their freedom and self-control.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议你用简单清晰的句子表达你的偏好，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's more convenient than paper, which I might lose or forget.

× Will are you know Michael is where I shall be 'cause sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetable when I go out of my home.

✓ You know where Michael will be because sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetables when I go out of my home.

句中“Will are you know Michael is where I shall be”语序错误且助动词使用不当，应调整为“You know where Michael will be”。另外，“vegetable”应为复数形式“vegetables”，因为通常买的是多种蔬菜。

× Will are you know Michael is where I shall be 'cause sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetable when I go out of my home.

✓ You know where Michael will be because sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetables when I go out of my home.

“vegetable”应使用复数形式“vegetables”，因为买的通常是多种蔬菜。

× But when I come back home I sometimes bring a lot of thing and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

✓ But when I come back home I sometimes bring a lot of things and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

“thing”应为复数形式“things”，因为表示很多东西。

× sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetable when I go out of my home.

✓ sometimes I usually carry a text to buy vegetables when I go out of my home.

“go out of my home”中“out of”用法不自然，建议改为“go out from my home”或更简洁的“leave my home”，但此处保留原句结构，仅纠正复数。

× I sometimes bring a lot of thing and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

✓ I sometimes bring a lot of things and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

“thing”应为复数形式“things”，表示很多东西。

× I sometimes bring a lot of thing and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

✓ I sometimes bring a lot of things and send the leisure photos as an ice cream so I will know my at least.

“thing”应为复数形式“things”，表示很多东西。

× I don't like my girl list of my work 'cause every day on my work is different an everyday I had different tax help to do to deal with.

✓ I don't like my work list because every day at my work is different and every day I have different tasks to do and deal with.

“list”前的“girl”应去除，且“tax”应为“tasks”，表示任务，且为复数。

× every day on my work is different an everyday I had different tax help to do to deal with.

✓ every day at my work is different and every day I have different tasks to do and deal with.

“on my work”应改为“at my work”，表示在工作场所。

× every day on my work is different an everyday I had different tax help to do to deal with.

✓ every day at my work is different and every day I have different tasks to do and deal with.

“had”应改为现在时“have”，因为描述的是日常情况。

× Sometimes I had to meet different people, sometimes I have to think about.

✓ Sometimes I have to meet different people, sometimes I have to think about things.

“had”应改为现在时“have”，且“think about”后应补充宾语，如“things”，使句子完整。

× Bicol making list at 8 APA Ability of self-control and sing clarity.

✓ Because making lists requires the ability of self-control and single clarity.

“Bicol”应为“Because”，且句子结构不完整，需补充谓语动词。

× So many people just do what they want to do anytime.

✓ So many people just do what they want to do anytime.

此句无明显代词错误，保持原句。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I carry my phone every time and is always in my hand.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry my phone all the time and it is always in my hand.

“list”应为复数“lists”，“every time”应改为“all the time”，且缺少主语“it”。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I carry my phone every time and is always in my hand.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry my phone all the time and it is always in my hand.

“is always in my hand”缺少主语，应加“it”。

× But if I may at least on paper and sometimes I just kept could file this paper is going there, so I like to make all my phone.

✓ But if I make a list on paper, sometimes I just keep the paper in a file, so I like to make all my lists on my phone.

句中“if I may at least on paper”语法错误，应为“if I make a list on paper”，且“kept could file this paper is going there”语序混乱，需调整为“keep the paper in a file”。