List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số phần không rõ ràng, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't go shopping very often because I am usually busy with work. However, when I do shop, I always make a list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I can quickly find the items I need without wandering around the store.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Một số câu bị lặp từ và thiếu liên kết rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'help' thay vì 'helps' khi chủ ngữ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, hãy trình bày ý rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because I am not very organized and sometimes lazy. Recently, I started using Google Calendar to plan my schedule, which helps me manage my time more effectively and stay on track with my tasks. This method has really improved my productivity.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp các lý do cụ thể hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and prefer to start working right away. For example, they may believe that planning slows them down. Also, some find it easier to remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone using Google Calendar because it is very convenient. It integrates many functions that help me manage my tasks efficiently.

× Well, to be honest, I don't go shopping very often because I'm not I'm not kept working on it.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't go shopping very often because I'm not working on it.

The phrase 'I'm not I'm not kept working on it' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'I'm not working on it' to express the present continuous tense. The word 'kept' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× For example, I can fight the thing that I need so without wandering around the store.

✓ For example, I can find the things that I need without wandering around the store.

The word 'fight' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'find'. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context. The phrase 'so without' is incorrect and should be removed for clarity.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work because I know that I'm not alone and organized person and a bit lazy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work because I know that I'm not an organized person and a bit lazy.

The phrase 'I'm not alone and organized person' is incorrect. It should be 'I'm not an organized person'. The word 'alone' is unnecessary and changes the meaning.

× So recently I have started using Google Calendar to plan my schedule which help me to manage my time more effectively and stay on tracts with my task which and this method has really improved my productivity.

✓ So recently I have started using Google Calendar to plan my schedule which helps me to manage my time more effectively and stay on track with my tasks, and this method has really improved my productivity.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'Google Calendar'. 'Tracts' is a typo and should be 'track'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions.

× Well, I think he some people don't like making this is because they feel it is time consuming and prefer to start working immediately.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it is time-consuming and prefer to start working immediately.

The phrase 'he some people' is incorrect; 'he' should be removed. 'Making this' is unclear and should be 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Also, some people may find it easier to like remember the task without writing them down.

✓ Also, some people may find it easier to remember the tasks without writing them down.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'The task' should be plural 'the tasks' to match 'them down'.

× I prefer to make a list on my Google Calendar. So I would say I would prefer to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient and it it integrate a lot of functions that make me feel like a task.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my Google Calendar. So I would say I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient and it integrates a lot of functions that help me manage tasks.

The phrase 'it it integrate' has a repeated word and incorrect verb form; it should be 'it integrates'. 'Make me feel like a task' is unclear and should be 'help me manage tasks' for clarity.