List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'properly categorized' instead of 'properly categorize'. Also, the last word 'Petra' seems out of place. Try to make your answer more concise and clear, directly addressing the question with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me organize the items I need and avoid buying unnecessary things. For example, I categorize products by food, household items, and personal care to make shopping more efficient.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains awkward phrasing like 'plan everything I want throughout my entire day' and 'And at first.' Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about how making lists helps you at work.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me remember all my tasks and prioritize the most important ones. For instance, I list urgent emails first, then meetings and project work, which makes my day more organized and productive.

제안: Your answer has repetition ('before before') and unclear phrases like 'It can be stopping or work'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists, and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible. Also, they might find lists restrictive or time-consuming. In contrast, I like planning because it helps me prioritize tasks and stay focused.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing like 'it is quite efficient for me that using a phone would save so much time'. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more efficient. Typing is faster than writing by hand, and I can easily edit or delete items. Also, using my phone saves paper, which is better for the environment.

× I think it's better to properly categorized the products that I really want to purchase or not to make my inventory. Petra.

✓ I think it's better to properly categorize the products that I really want to purchase or not to make my inventory. Petra.

The verb 'categorize' should be in its base form after 'to' because 'to' is part of the infinitive form 'to categorize'. Using 'categorized' (past tense) here is incorrect.

× I usually do this to not forget about anything and prioritize the work I need to do before. And at first.

✓ I usually do this so that I don't forget anything and can prioritize the work I need to do first.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'To not forget' is better expressed as 'so that I don't forget'. 'Prioritize the work I need to do before' is incomplete; 'before' needs an object or should be replaced with 'first'. 'And at first' is a fragment and should be removed or integrated properly.

× It can be stopping or work, but I like to plan everything because it tells me prioritize that work.

✓ It can be shopping or work, but I like to plan everything because it helps me prioritize that work.

'Stopping' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'shopping'. Also, 'because it tells me prioritize that work' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because it helps me prioritize that work' to convey the intended meaning.

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than a paper because it is quite efficient for me that using a phone would save so much time as I type faster as well as it won't be a waste.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is quite efficient for me; using a phone saves a lot of time since I type faster, and it is not a waste.

The phrase 'rather than a paper' should be 'rather than on paper' because 'on paper' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, the sentence is run-on and awkward; it is better to split it and clarify the meaning for better flow and correctness.