List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和犹豫词汇，使用更自然流畅的表达。

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy things spontaneously when I see them. Therefore, I rarely prepare a list before going shopping.

제안: 回答中断且表达不清，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always help because I tend to procrastinate and fail to follow the list.

제안: 表达不清且语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和句型，明确说明原因。

예시: I don't like making lists because plans often change when I am doing things, so I find lists not very helpful.

제안: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意冠词使用，简化表达，使语言更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily edit them and carry my phone anywhere. If I use paper, I might forget the list.

× I often buy something when I saw it

✓ I often buy something when I see it

这里的时间是现在时态，表示经常发生的动作，所以应该用一般现在时的动词see，而不是过去时saw。

× I can imagine I will buy it before I bought it in a shop

✓ I can imagine I will buy it before I buy it in a shop

这里描述的是将来发生的动作，前后时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时buy而不是过去时bought。

× I rarely make a list before going to a shop

✓ I rarely make lists before going to a shop

这里指的是一般情况，通常会有多个购物清单，应该用复数lists。

× sometimes I make a list for for my work

✓ sometimes I make lists for my work

同样，工作清单通常不止一个，应该用复数lists。

× because I often. A/B procrastinate and I cannot catch my list

✓ because I often procrastinate and I cannot catch up with my list

procrastinate是动词原形，不能加A/B，且短语应为catch up with，表示跟上进度。

× I cannot catch my list

✓ I cannot catch up with my list

这里应该用短语catch up with表示赶上，不能直接用catch。

× I am the people who don't like to make it lists

✓ I am one of the people who don't like to make lists

people是复数，前面应加one of表示“我属于不喜欢做清单的人之一”，且lists复数。

× because I think they are changes when I actually doing something

✓ because I think there are changes when I am actually doing something

changes是名词，前面应加there are表示存在，doing前应加am构成现在进行时。

× After I plant and I cannot always follow the plan to making lists is not very helpful for me

✓ After I plan, and I cannot always follow the plan, making lists is not very helpful for me

plant应为plan，making lists作为主语不需要to，句子需要逗号分隔。

× I prefer to make list on my phone

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone

list应为复数lists，表示一般情况。

× I can take it with me and anywhere

✓ I can take it with me anywhere

with me和anywhere连用时不需要and，直接连接即可。

× If I make list on my paper

✓ If I make lists on paper

list应为复数lists，且on my paper改为on paper更自然。