List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有一些语法和表达上的错误，且内容有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且注意发音和用词的准确性。可以尝试用更自然流畅的表达方式来描述购物习惯。

예시: No, I usually shop spontaneously because I enjoy browsing. When I visit a large shopping mall, I like to walk around and pick up things that catch my eye. Sometimes, shopping is just a fun way for me to relax and spend time.

제안: 回答结构较好，但有些语法错误和表达不够清晰。建议注意冠词和动词形式的使用，句子可以更简洁明了，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I am a big fan of making lists for my work because I am very organized. Having a list helps me plan my day and feel more secure. Usually, I prepare everything in advance to ensure I stay on track.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更准确的时态和词汇，同时增加连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed. They worry about not being able to follow the plan and may feel like failures if they don't complete their tasks.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复词汇，注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I used to make lists on paper, but I often lost them and forgot my tasks. Now, I prefer using my phone because the apps are well organized and very convenient for managing my daily to-do list.

× I like divide when I go to a big shopping Moran, Brendan, Brendan Lee render round and then find something and like and I'll buy it.

✓ I like dividing when I go to a big shopping mall, wandering around and then finding something I like and I'll buy it.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢做某事，原句中用动词原形'divide'错误，应改为'dividing'。

× I like divide when I go to a big shopping Moran, Brendan, Brendan Lee render round and then find something and like and I'll buy it.

✓ I like dividing when I go to a big shopping mall, wandering around and then finding something I like and I'll buy it.

原句中'Moran'应为'mall'，且'wandering around'表示四处闲逛，使用正确的介词短语更符合表达。

× I like divide when I go to a big shopping Moran, Brendan, Brendan Lee render round and then find something and like and I'll buy it.

✓ I like dividing when I go to a big shopping mall, wandering around and then finding something I like and I'll buy it.

'something'是不可数或单数，后面不应直接跟复数名词，需调整句子结构。

× And sometimes I just like to go to the shopping Moran, spend money.

✓ And sometimes I just like to go to the shopping mall to spend money.

动词不定式'to spend'用来表示目的，原句缺少'to'，导致表达不完整。

× Yes, I'm a big fan of making list for my work and I guess my MBTI ends with a J so that means I'm very organized and a stick to my plan.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of making lists for my work and I guess my MBTI ends with a J so that means I'm very organized and stick to my plan.

'list'应为复数'lists'，因为通常会制作多个清单；'a stick'中的'a'多余，应去掉。

× I like to have a list to unfold my day and it makes me feel secure.

✓ I like to have a list to organize my day and it makes me feel secure.

'unfold my day'表达不准确，应该用'organize'来表达安排一天的意思。

× And for my work, I usually keep things well before.

✓ And for my work, I usually keep things well prepared beforehand.

'keep things well before'表达不完整，应该用'keep things well prepared beforehand'表示提前准备好。

× I think it is probably because people will feel overwhelmed and if it was just about the plan, they worry that they cannot stick to the plan and may feel a failure when they couldn't accomplish the task they list for today.

✓ I think it is probably because people feel overwhelmed and if it is just about the plan, they worry that they cannot stick to the plan and may feel like a failure when they can't accomplish the tasks they list for today.

条件句中时态应一致，'if it was'改为'if it is'；'may feel a failure'应为'may feel like a failure'；'task'应为复数'tasks'。

× I used to make things on paper and then I found out I usually lose the paper and then I forgot what to do for the day.

✓ I used to make lists on paper and then I found out I usually lose the paper and then I forget what to do for the day.

'make things on paper'表达不准确，应为'make lists on paper'；时态保持一致，'forgot'改为'forget'。

× And for now I use the phone because the app was very well organized and we're convenient to be used.

✓ And for now I use the phone because the app is very well organized and is convenient to use.

'we're'错误，应为'is'；'to be used'改为'to use'更自然。

× So I preferred to record record everything I need to do today on my phone.

✓ So I prefer to record everything I need to do today on my phone.

'preferred'为过去式，句意为现在习惯，应使用一般现在时'prefer'。