List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct English to express your ideas naturally and effectively.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember the items I need to buy and avoid forgetting anything important.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Please try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain how making lists helps you at work with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me organize my daily tasks. For example, it ensures I don't forget important duties and helps me manage my time more efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Please try to answer directly why some people dislike making lists, giving specific reasons and using simple, correct English. Avoid irrelevant or confusing words.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they prefer to remember things in their own way. They might feel that lists are unnecessary for them.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry. Also, I can quickly add or remove items, which helps me stay organized and saves paper.

× Yes, I almost look at least when I was going to shopping it's making wedding had only to reminder, but the stuff I should or I had to purchase.

✓ Yes, I almost always look at my list when I go shopping; it serves as a reminder of the stuff I should or have to purchase.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'look at least' instead of 'look at my list' and mixes tenses with 'was going to shopping' which should be 'go shopping' to match habitual action. Also, 'it's making wedding had only to reminder' is unclear and incorrect; it should be rephrased to express the list's purpose as a reminder. The correction uses present tense for habitual actions and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I often look a list for my work as a physical person, making this help me organize my daily task and ensures I don't forget any important treatments for migrations, but definitely increase my conditions enhancing manage my time better.

✓ Yes, I often look at a list for my work as a physical person; this helps me organize my daily tasks and ensures I don't forget any important treatments for migraines, and definitely improves my condition by helping me manage my time better.

The phrase 'look a list' is incorrect; it should be 'look at a list' because 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to something. Also, 'making this help me' is incorrect; it should be 'this helps me'. The sentence also had plural/singular mismatches and unclear phrases which were corrected for clarity and grammar.

× It is not like doing some people don't like English twice on their own ******* ordinary people and works, but I don't think they think that they have loaded Outlook English because they remember him. Don't work too good.

✓ Some people don't like making lists on their own because they find it ordinary or unnecessary, but I don't think they believe they have a good memory; lists help them remember better.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases like 'English twice' and 'loaded Outlook English' which seem to be errors or mistranslations. The correction interprets the intended meaning and uses correct pronouns and clearer expressions.

× On my phone because it is very convenient and easy to carry and sometimes I lose my phone but I still find it better than using people since I can quickly adapt all add items. Also using ads help me still organized and save paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to carry. Sometimes I lose my phone, but I still find it better than using paper since I can quickly add all items. Also, using apps helps me stay organized and save paper.

The phrase 'better than using people' is incorrect; it should be 'better than using paper'. Also, 'adapt all add items' is incorrect and should be 'add all items'. 'Using ads' is likely a typo for 'using apps'. Prepositions and word choices were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.