List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally and effectively.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list at home before I go out. This helps me remember everything my mother needs and avoid forgetting important items.

제안: Your answer has many errors and unclear words. Focus on giving a direct answer with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. This way, I don't forget any important items.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and grammar mistakes. Try to explain reasons clearly using simple sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they find it too strict and prefer to keep their thoughts flexible. Also, making lists can be time-consuming and sometimes unnecessary.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Please answer directly and clearly, explaining your preference with specific reasons and linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It is very convenient and helps me keep my lists organized.

× Yes, I'm a college.

✓ Yes, I'm a college student.

The original sentence lacks a complete noun phrase. 'I'm a college' is incomplete because 'college' is a place, not a person. The correct phrase is 'I'm a college student' to indicate the speaker's status.

× When I get to shopping I make a list where from home because my mother needed everything that I write all the new did.

✓ When I go shopping, I make a list at home because my mother needs everything, so I write down all the new items.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues and incorrect verb forms. 'Get to shopping' should be 'go shopping'. 'Where from home' is incorrect; it should be 'at home'. 'Needed' should be 'needs' to match present tense. The phrase 'that I write all the new did' is unclear and corrected to 'so I write down all the new items' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make girlish of for my office because I it helped me to remember everything that I need and prevent me from the party important item.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my office because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.

The phrase 'make girlish of' is incorrect and replaced with 'make a list'. 'I it helped me' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'it helps me'. 'Prevent me from the party important item' is unclear and corrected to 'prevents me from forgetting important items'. The verb tenses are adjusted to present simple to match habitual action.

× Some people dislike him making this because they find it is strictly dancer fact prefer to keep their thoughts more flexible.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it too strict and prefer to keep their thoughts more flexible.

The phrase 'dislike him making this' is incorrect; 'dislike making lists' is correct. 'Strictly dancer fact' is nonsensical and corrected to 'too strict'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Additionally, making flex list Canfield time-consuming and if you will be added.

✓ Additionally, making a fixed list can be time-consuming and may add pressure.

'Making flex list Canfield' is incorrect; corrected to 'making a fixed list can be'. 'If you will be added' is unclear and replaced with 'may add pressure' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to make a restaurant phone because it very helpful mean to because I always take Pokémon with myself and it's very really helped me to. Make a list of phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very helpful; I always take my phone with me and it really helps me to make a list.

'Make a restaurant phone' is incorrect; corrected to 'make a list on my phone'. 'Very helpful mean to' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'very helpful'. 'Take Pokémon with myself' is incorrect; corrected to 'take my phone with me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.