List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything."

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping to make sure I buy everything I need.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, start with a topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words like "because" or "so."

예시: Yes, I often make a list of tasks I need to complete during the day because it helps me organize my activities more clearly and efficiently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details and use linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, which they find more convenient."

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and find it easier to remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember the items better and for a longer time compared to typing on my phone.

× Yes, whenever I go for shopping, I.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping, I do.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'I'. The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Adding 'do' completes the sentence structure properly.

× Are you carried a list where I where I brought all things that I want to buy?

✓ Do you carry a list where I bring all the things that I want to buy?

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and confusing. 'Are you carried' is incorrect; the correct auxiliary verb is 'Do you carry'. Also, 'where I where I brought' is repetitive and incorrect tense; it should be 'where I bring'. 'All things' should be 'all the things' for specificity.

× Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it help?

The question 'Does it work?' is ambiguous. Assuming the intended meaning is whether the list helps, 'Does it help?' is more appropriate. No plural or singular issue here, but the phrase is improved for clarity.

× Yes, many times when I have a number of works in my day, then I make a list of all the work that I need to do in that day.

✓ Yes, many times when I have a number of tasks in my day, I make a list of all the work that I need to do that day.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'tasks' or 'jobs' is more appropriate. Also, 'then' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× So it helps me to do a clear version of my daily activity.

✓ So it helps me to have a clear plan of my daily activities.

The phrase 'do a clear version' is awkward and incorrect. 'Have a clear plan' is a better expression. Also, 'daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities' to indicate multiple tasks.

× Because some people prefer that.

✓ Because some people prefer that.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks an object or explanation of what 'that' refers to. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, no change is made here.

× They remember all things that they want to remember, so they don't make list many times.

✓ They remember all the things that they want to remember, so they don't make lists often.

'All things' should be 'all the things' for specificity. 'Make list many times' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists often' to indicate frequency and correct plural form.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because whenever I.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because whenever I write,

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'write' completes the thought and connects to the next idea.

× I start writing on paper is there the words I wrote is settled and fully remembered at more longer time.

✓ When I start writing on paper, the words I write are settled and remembered for a longer time.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'is there' is incorrect, verb tense inconsistency ('wrote' should be 'write'), and awkward phrasing 'fully remembered at more longer time'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.