List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary items and save money.

제안: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ và cách dùng từ. Hãy trình bày câu trả lời ngắn gọn, đủ ý và dễ hiểu.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me know what tasks I need to complete and their deadlines. This method allows me to finish everything on time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lủng củng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Ngoài ra, hãy trình bày rõ ràng lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it is unnecessary and a waste of time. They prefer to start working on the project directly without planning.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi chính tả. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because when I see the list, it reminds me of what I need to do. However, I often forget to check lists on my phone, so paper works better for me.

× Yes I own ways make a list when I go shopping because it Remember Me what I need to buy can don't make me extra vacant and sometimes I buy things I need in don't reduce money.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it reminds me what I need to buy, it doesn't make me buy extra things, and sometimes I buy things I don't need which wastes money.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms such as 'own ways make' instead of 'always make', 'Remember Me' instead of 'reminds me', and 'can don't make me extra vacant' which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The verbs need to be in the correct present tense and form to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes I own ways make a list when I go shopping because it Remember Me what I need to buy can don't make me extra vacant and sometimes I buy things I need in don't reduce money.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it reminds me what I need to buy, it doesn't make me buy extra things, and sometimes I buy things I don't need which wastes money.

The phrase 'can don't make me extra vacant' is incorrect modal verb usage. 'Can' should not be combined with 'don't' in this way. The correct form is 'it doesn't make me buy extra things' to express the intended meaning.

× And yes, I make a list for my work because I can know I need to do something in what I need to do, an what is the dead light of the project.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because I can know what I need to do and what the deadline of the project is.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing such as 'I can know I need to do something in what I need to do' and 'dead light' instead of 'deadline'. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing improve understanding.

× And yes, I make a list for my work because I can know I need to do something in what I need to do, an what is the dead light of the project.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because I can know what I need to do and what the deadline of the project is.

The phrase 'in what I need to do' is an incorrect use of preposition. The correct phrase is 'what I need to do' without 'in' to properly express the idea.

× And this is very good for me, for myself, because I think when I did that I can do everything in good time.

✓ And this is very good for me because I think when I do that I can do everything on time.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'did' when referring to a habitual or general action. Present tense 'do' is appropriate here. Also, 'in good time' is better expressed as 'on time' in this context.

× Because many people think this is not. Necessary and they think that if they have a project, they just do that after and don't need to make a list because it's not good.

✓ Because many people think this is not necessary and they think that if they have a project, they can just do it later and don't need to make a list because it's not good.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction usage and sentence fragments. 'This is not. Necessary' should be 'this is not necessary'. Also, 'do that after' is better as 'do it later' for clarity.

× Or is it the wasted time to make a list and do the project?

✓ Or is it a waste of time to make a list and do the project?

The phrase 'the wasted time' is incorrect here; 'a waste of time' is the correct expression. Also, 'do the project' is acceptable but the phrase needs to be clearer.

× I prefer micalis on my paper because if I see my parent I can remember that I need to do while something but on my phone I didn't do that because when I make in a phone and sometime I don't go to the list to see that so I don't remember what I need to do.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because if I see my paper I can remember what I need to do, but on my phone I don't do that because when I make a list on my phone, sometimes I don't check it, so I don't remember what I need to do.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and word choice errors such as 'micalis' instead of 'making lists', 'my parent' instead of 'my paper', and inconsistent tense usage. Correct pronouns and word choices improve clarity.