List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'forgetting things'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I don't want to forget anything, especially when shopping for special occasions like birthday parties.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và liên kết ý bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it helps me avoid forgetting tasks. It also allows me to organize my work and prioritize important tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để giải thích ý kiến của mình rõ hơn.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they want to stay flexible. Sometimes, they prefer to adapt to different situations rather than follow a fixed plan.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it helps me organize both my work and study efficiently, and I can easily access my lists anytime.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I don't want to forgetting.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I don't want to forget.

The verb 'forget' should be in its base form after 'to' as 'to' is part of the infinitive form 'to forget'. Using 'forgetting' here is incorrect because '-ing' form is not used after 'to' in infinitives.

× Things. Specially in shopping for a special occasion like birthday parties.

✓ Especially when shopping for a special occasion like birthday parties.

The word 'Specially' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb is 'Especially'. Also, the sentence fragment 'Things.' is incomplete and should be connected properly to the following phrase for clarity.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it's really helpful because it's happening too.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it's really helpful because it helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

The phrase 'it's happening too' is unclear and incorrectly used. The pronoun 'it' should refer clearly to the subject, and the sentence should express the intended meaning clearly.

× A voice of forgetting task by making a agenda an I can't organize my work to select something prioritized to do something and.

✓ By making an agenda, I can avoid forgetting tasks and organize my work to prioritize what to do.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect quantifiers ('a agenda' should be 'an agenda'), unclear phrases ('voice of forgetting task'), and incomplete sentence structure. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects quantifiers.

× I think that's because people want to be stay flexible.

✓ I think that's because people want to stay flexible.

The phrase 'be stay' is incorrect; only one verb is needed here. 'Want to stay' is the correct form.

× Sometimes they want to do things adapted different situation an an they want to everything was.

✓ Sometimes they want to do things adapted to different situations, and they want everything to be flexible.

The sentence has incorrect conjunctions and missing prepositions. 'Adapted to' is the correct phrase, and 'and' should be used properly to connect clauses. The phrase 'they want everything was' is incomplete and corrected to 'they want everything to be flexible' for clarity.

× I refer making a list on my phone because nowadays people use font a are attuned to organize work study, so is happy to connect the between my work and my study if I effectively moreover using phone.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because nowadays people use phones and are attuned to organizing work and study, so I am happy to connect my work and study effectively by using my phone.

The sentence contains multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'refer' should be 'prefer', 'font a are' is incorrect and replaced with 'phones and are', and sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.